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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
Title: A Good Father 29 Oct 2008 2:51 am
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story. Cant wait until I read what happens next. :)

    Author's Response: A lot starts to happen in the next few chapters.
Title: A Good Father 21 Oct 2008 3:46 am
Reviewer: Mikee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, I caught up to you. I am so enjoying this.! I really liked the talk between Hal and Severus ... especially when Hal asked when Sev was going to ask Lily to marry him.

    Actually, I've liked the whole thing so far, and am quite looking forward to more. I'm still trying to figure out how to get alerts for when you update ... or even if they're available with this site. LOL

    Thank you.

    Author's Response: They are. If you mark the story as a favorite story, it will let you know when I've updated.  And if you mark me as a favorite author that will let you know when I've added something new to the site.  There's a small fic called Forbidden Flight that goes along with this series and it can be read before you finish this one, it's actually an elaboration on the time Harry flew his broom by himself through the neighborhood.  I should be posting another chapter to this soon! :) Thanks for reading, as always!
Title: A Good Father 19 Oct 2008 4:45 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great! lol i've moving through your stories :P

    Author's Response: Yes, i should be posting a new chapter soon, thanks for reading & reviewing!
Title: A Good Father 25 Sep 2008 11:41 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: A Good Father 25 Sep 2008 3:56 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent job! Hal handled Sev's concerns very well, just like a good dad. I think that Sev is lucky to have him there to ask advice. Harry is too adorable! Love this story!

    Update soon!

    Author's Response: I'll try, I've been sick for a few days, so it might take me a bit to get back up to speed.
Title: A Good Father 25 Sep 2008 3:54 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was so sweet! I love baby Harry and Sev will make a very good dad. Hal gave him some excellent advice.

    Author's Response: Yes he did and Sev will use it later on.
Title: A Good Father 25 Sep 2008 3:52 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved it all! harry reminds me of my baby brother.

    Author's Response: Aww, how sweet!
Title: A Good Father 25 Sep 2008 3:50 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes! I loved it! Harry is adorable and Sev will make such a good Dad, he's very controleld and he loves Harry to pieces. Loved the bit about Hal & Tuney and Lily too!

    Author's Response: Got that right, and I'm happy you liked that glimpse into Tuney & Lily's childhood via Hal.
Title: A Good Father 25 Sep 2008 3:47 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! You updated and it was well worth the wait. I loved it, Hal was great and I'm so glad Sev shared his feelings with him, he made the right choice.

    Can't wait till Sev's birthday and maybe he'll propose to Lily then?

    Author's Response: Ummm, you'll find out, won't you?
Title: A Good Father 24 Sep 2008 10:52 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, severus was very good with harry and his little tantrum, just to let you know britain isn't a football team, its england, wales, scotland, northern ireland or ireland, there is no joint british football team.

    hal gave severus some great advice, he is a great friend to have

    Author's Response:

    OMG, I do know that, my dad watches GOAL TV all the time, and I listen to it sometimes.  I don't know why I wrote that there, thanks for pointing it out to me, I'll go and fix it. 

    Hal is a much better friend and father figure to Sev than Tobias right now.   


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