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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
Title: Scars of the Past 28 Feb 2010 2:02 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I'd like to see Italy.
Title: Scars of the Past 04 Nov 2008 2:59 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    that was beautiful!

    Author's Response: Thanks, it was kind of hard to do the honeymoon scene and still keep it PG, but I managed.
Title: Scars of the Past 29 Oct 2008 9:42 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter and wonderful detail on italy, i have never been but it sounds nice, glad they enjoyed there honeymoon

    Author's Response: It is gorgeous and someday when I have enough money, like in five years, LOL, I want to return there and see it again. It did turn out to be a nice honeymoon, once Sev made up his mind to trust Lily with his past wounds. Trust is important in a marriage.
Title: Scars of the Past 29 Oct 2008 9:35 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, such a sweet and yet heartbreaking chapter. But it's true, people who have been abused often feel shame for being a victim. Brilliant portrayal here.

    Author's Response: Thanks, and you are one hundred percent right!
Title: Scars of the Past 29 Oct 2008 9:32 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I felt so bad for Sev I nearly cried! And the mere thought of Italy makes me faint!

    Author's Response: Hey, don't make me throw a glass of water on you! rnrnThanks for the review and things DO get better for Sev.
Title: Scars of the Past 29 Oct 2008 9:28 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww! I love the way Lily understands Severus and can make him feel good about himself. She's a true angel!

    Author's Response: Sev's a lucky guy all right!
Title: Scars of the Past 29 Oct 2008 6:11 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh italy sounds beautiful! I wish i could go there! What a lovely time they had and I feel bad for Severus, carrying that great burden. But at least Lily can help him.

    Author's Response: Yes, a burden is best shared, especially by the one who loves you best.
Title: Scars of the Past 29 Oct 2008 6:07 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I felt so bad for Severus, but I'm happy Lily could help him.

    Author's Response: So am I, he needed her more than he would admit, the poor guy.
Title: Scars of the Past 29 Oct 2008 5:00 pm
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked this one, I've been to Italy two years ago and it was awesome. :)

    Author's Response: I so want to go back there! I loved it! And that's why I had Sev & Lily go there for their honeymoon.
Title: Scars of the Past 29 Oct 2008 1:16 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I think this undestanding lovely Lily is how JKR always wanted us to see Lily. Only she never showed her that way. You did.
    I like to see Severus happy :)

    Author's Response:

    I like to see Severus happy too.  And I agree with you about JKR's Lily, but the only way she ever portryaed her was as a mother sacrificing herself for her son (a good image) and as an unforgiving teenager in DH when she refused to let Severus apologize to her or even explain why he had reacted the way he did when she defended him from the Marauders.  I expected so much more from her than that in the books and I was disappointed.  So when I chose to write her story, i made her into the woman she ought to have been, IMO.

    Look for a new chapter in about five minutes, okay? :)


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