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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
So... a big thank you! :D Author's Response: Thanks so much! I always wondered what it would be like if Severus were something other than a teacher and this just fit so well. Plus I love Severus and Lily together and raising Harry on top of it is just a bonus. Hope you enjoy the rest of this! Looking forward to seeing how you like it!
The handiling was good, but I would have slapped Petunia at least 50 times before they actually did. I would of slapped her even if I was Snape!!! I can't believe she did that, but I can understand how you make so she did, her despising eveeryone so much just for having something she didn't. I really hate her, and if I was Snape I would've grabbed Dudley when she had slapped Harry and slapped him. I hope they never get metioned again!!! Author's Response: They won't. Petunia will make one last appearance much later on in the story, but after that they are history. She is a very jealous and nasty woman! Sev would never hit a child the way Petunia hit Harry, not after what he's been through. Petunia was lucky he didn't hex her though. But he kept his cool like a mature adult and let Lily have a go at her sister instead.
Author's Response: You, me, and half the other people who reviewed this. She's an utter idiot!
Author's Response: Me too! If anyone deserved a good smack, it's Petunia. Although Dudley and Vernon are next on my list.
I was surprised that the whole big family knows about magic :-0 I always thought only the nearest members were allowed to be told. Mila Author's Response: yeah, I thought of you when Lily did that, it was just what the pain-in-the-butt deserved!rnrnNot everyone knows about magic, just a few people--Hal and Vi, Charley knows a bit, but they all thought the argument was over their kids and Sev, which it was. That's why Severus took Harry away to treat his face after the argument, so no one would see what he did and so Lily could fix Smokey. They kind of stayed away from everyone after that, until most of the guests went home. rnrnI would say that the family was on Lily and Severus's side though, and nobody much missed the Dursleys.
Author's Response: Yes, and you're not the only one! They're both terrible!
Author's Response: If Vernon had come out, Sev would've, but since it was Petunia, Lily handled it. Hmmm . . .maybe I could have Vernon return and Sev kick his ass then?
Author's Response: Definitely, but she'll probably never learn, unless God strikes her with a bolt of inspiration or something. They certainly don't need her causing trouble.
Author's Response: I agree!
Author's Response: Good, she needs more people to do so, the spiteful cow. |
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