bless i kno how sev feels lol
Author's Response: So do I! I've been through that so many times!
That was good, I wonder what the advice will be like!!! I really enjoy the way that it really is like Harry is growing up, and it really makes you feel you are there. I think you should get some publishers round to look at this, because you really have a natural talent. Although you would have to ask J.K. Rowling because you are using her characters, unless of course you change the names of everything, and have a bit at the beginning when you introduce everyone in your book, with short personality descriptions and stuff. It would be really good. At least you wouldn't have to create a series name and name of the book, because you already have that.
Author's Response: I could do that, of course, if I wanted to, it would be an interesting twist. I'm glad you're enjoying this and you like the realism I tried to put in here, because I think it's important for a story to feel real to the reader, otherwise why bother reading it?
| Title: Severus Snape & the Terrible Two-Year-Old Brat
| 06 Nov 2008 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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I really liked this chapter. I felt embarrassed for Severus as well. I feel sorry for Harry getting in trouble though. :)
Author's Response: Yes well, he did deserve it and poor Sev was like at his wits end there. I would have just died, I think.
| Title: Severus Snape & the Terrible Two-Year-Old Brat
| 05 Nov 2008 3:04 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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Shades of my grandson there! Brilliant job! I'm so glad my kids are grown!
Author's Response: LOL! In a way I'm glad I never had kids.
| Title: Severus Snape & the Terrible Two-Year-Old Brat
| 05 Nov 2008 3:00 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Wow! Think I'd die if my kid ever did that.
harry reminds me of my little brother tho!
Author's Response: So would I, LOL!
| Title: Severus Snape & the Terrible Two-Year-Old Brat
| 05 Nov 2008 2:57 am
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Ahhh1 I felt like I was watching my son, who's 3, have one of his fits. Boy can I sympathize with Severus. Kids are tough, especially when they act up in public.
Author's Response: Yes and I'm glad to have so many people who agree with the way I've written this.
| Title: Severus Snape & the Terrible Two-Year-Old Brat
| 05 Nov 2008 2:54 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Man alive, but I remember those days too well and harry's lucky he's not my son, he'd of gotten a spanking. My son tried to pull that same 'you're not my mom and I don't like you" thing too when I wouldn't get him a toy once.
Good for Sev for sticking to his guns, he's a smart one.
Author's Response: Kids are all the same, they really like to yank your chain to see how far they can go. But now Harry knows better.
| Title: Severus Snape & the Terrible Two-Year-Old Brat
| 05 Nov 2008 2:40 am
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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OMG! I felt like I was deja vu-ing my son's terrible twos period. It was so very true to life! Loved it, but poor Sev has his work cut out for him.
Author's Response: He does indeed, but hopefully he'll be up to the challenge.
| Title: Severus Snape & the Terrible Two-Year-Old Brat
| 05 Nov 2008 1:42 am
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| Reviewer: Mikee (Anonymous)
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Oh my -- that was quite some shopping trip. Poor Sev. I really felt bad for him ... and his ears.
I liked that he held fast to what he said he'd do.
I'm quite looking forward to seeing what you do next with the story. I so enjoy your work.
Thank you.
Author's Response: Me too! Believe me, I've heard kids screaming non-stop where I work and I'd hate to be the parent stuck with the screaming child! Ow! My next chapter is posted, by the way. So happy you're enjoying this! :)
| Title: Severus Snape & the Terrible Two-Year-Old Brat
| 03 Nov 2008 6:17 pm
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| Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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The sympathetic by passers were just great. Mila
Author's Response: Yeah it's always nice to have sympathetic ones, instead of ones who threaten to call the authorities, LOL!
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