| Title: I Wish
| 16 Jun 2014 10:07 am
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| Reviewer: Chelsey (Anonymous)
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Good story so far. However, Polaris is not the brightest star in the sky, not even close. The only thing remarkable about that star is that it lines up with our magnetic pole fairly well for now. The brightest star in the northern hemisphere is Sirius. Sorry I work for a planetarium and this bothered me. Other wise I really like your writing :)
| Title: I Wish
| 16 Jun 2014 10:04 am
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| Reviewer: Chelsey (Anonymous)
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Good story so far. However, Polaris is not the brightest star, not even close. The brightest star I the northern hemisphere is Sirius. Sorry I work at a planetarium and this bothered me a lot.
Sev isn't sterile, is he?
| Title: I Wish
| 24 Nov 2008 4:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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I really liked this chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I liked it too!
Harry is really clever for a three years old. Mila
Author's Response: He is, but then, he is a wizard, so he ought to be smart, right?
oooo they are so adorable!
Author's Response: Yes, I know! I loved writing this one.
| Title: I Wish
| 16 Nov 2008 2:22 am
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| Reviewer: caro (Anonymous)
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Hi, I always like this story, but have to be honest, we all know what's coming, and I don't want to read anything sad, especially when they're all so happy at the moment, so I think i'm gonna say goodbye to this fic now.
Author's Response: Please read the next few chapters, Lily doesn't die right away, and there are some classic moments between harry and severus that shouldn't be missed. But yes, the end of this story is tragic.
Wonderful chapter! I loved the lily and Harry moments, but this is foreshadowing for the disaster I know is coming.
Author's Response: Yes and thanks for reviewing.
Oh no, something tells me this is the beginning of trouble? Is this the part when Lily starts getting sick??
I feel really bad now!
Author's Response: it starts in the next chapter, but she won't start getting really sick until four chapters past the next one.
| Title: I Wish
| 16 Nov 2008 1:40 am
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| Reviewer: Kerowyn (Anonymous)
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Aww, such a sweet chapter, and yet I just know something bad is going to happen.
Author's Response: You're right, something bad does happen. Thanks for reviewing.
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