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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
This is the first of your chapters that made tears actually fall. They were threatening the whole chapter, but the first journal entry did me in. I stopped reading right before the second journal entry, because (of all wonderful things) there was a rerun of Daniel Radcliffe on Conan O'Brien on and I wanted to watch. I laughed and was happy for 10 minutes and within ten seconds of starting up the chapter again, I was crying harder than I was before, and I wouldn't stop. Okay, enough of my sob-story (no pun intended). This chapter was gut-wrenching and sad and sweet and made me feel awful all in one, and you did a marvelous job. I'm so afraid to read the rest of the story now. Silly, huh? But, knowing what's coming, I don't know if I'm strong enough to handle it tonight, lol. It's well after midnight and my poor heart has suffered so much, lol. (Speaking of which, your stories have literally put my life on hold for the last week, aside from work and eating and sleeping! I keep wishing there was an audiobook so I could listen while working) Ugh, I think I need to finish it tomorrow. I don't think I can take anymore heartache tonight. You are an AMAZING author, which makes it THAT MUCH HARDER. Darn you ;) Author's Response: You know, this chapter STILL makes me cry every time I re-read it. And I'm not saying it just because I wrote it, either. That's why I kept posting the Kleenex warnings on these last few chapters, because I could barely see my computer while I wrote. I am honored that you feel so strongly about my work, I try very hard to make my readers feel what my characters do, as i feel when I write about them. I always have Sev whispering in my ear or Harry or Lily, telling me this is how it should sound. Speaking of that, I sometimes read aloud parts of my work to myself to see if I have the tone and phrasing down, and I read aloud some of my stories to my nephews, they like when I do all the different voices. So an audiobook would probably be a good idea, LOL. And yes, there will be some major sad parts coming up, so I'd say just get yourself the extra large box of Kleenex or several dozen handkerchiefs and a large mug of hot chocolate, which is what I did when I wrote those last scenes. I also wrote the last chapter listening to My Heart Will Go On by Celine Dione, another tear-jerker song. I call this work my Nicholas Sparks novel, because one of the major characters dies in it and it's so heart-wrenching. Thank you for being so interested in my work and enjoying it, i have several original works that I am shopping around for an agent to look at, hopefully someone will contact me soon.
Author's Response: Aww! You're not the only one either.
The chapter was excellent - very well done. I felt so sorry for poor little Harry when Lily collapsed on the kitchen floor. I imagine that that was quite terrifying for such a young child. Moving along to the next chapter. Thank you. Author's Response: So did I, and that part was based on a real life moment that happened to my brother when he was little and found my sister passed out on the floor, she'd knocked herself out by breathing in Sea Breeze while washing her face. Luckily, my mother was home and took control of things. But my brother was quite terrified, he was only six and my sister was around thirteen. Good thing my sister was fine when she woke up.
Author's Response: Thanks, I recently had a friend pass away from an illness and so some of what I write here is based upon what her family went through, as well as my own feelings about what it would be like to witness such a thing.
Author's Response: Thank you, those entries were very hard to write. Harry will have a great birthday.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Happy Thanksgiving to you too! This story is so intense that I cry while I'm writing it. In fact, I have to take a break every now and then, and so I've posted a new short fic called Harry Potter Dogsitter, a humorous tale, it'll make you laugh rather than cry, if you want to read it. And I've just posted a new update to both of them, by the way.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so very sorry for your loss. My mom's sick with parkinsons and sometimes I wonder how long she has . . .it's very hard watching a loved one slowly getting worse like that. You feel so helpless. Thanks for reading and I apologize if I brought up any bad memories.
Keep up the good work, I enjoy all your stories and look forward to more. Author's Response: Oh God, that would be so terrible, and yet I can see it happening. I'm sorry for your loss, my mother is sick with Parkinsons and my dad recently recovered from cancer, and I am always afraid that some morning I'll wake up or come home from work and find one of them has passed away . . .it's scary. But if you want to be cheered up, read my new fic, Harry Potter Dogsitter, it's a funny fluffy romp with Harry and a mischievous puppy, kind of like Marley if you've read Marley and Me. That's my therapy from writing this fic, which is so emotionally intense I am exhausted after writing a chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I hope you enjoy it! it's one of my favorites! |
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