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Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 4:00 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! Sniff sniff! Need...sniff sniff...more....sniff...sniff....kleenex!

    Oh, if death could be described as beautiful, you have done so my dear! Sniff sniff! Ah darn, you've gone and done it. Now I'm gonna bawl my eyes out, cause I've had a rotten week, and was already feeling down! :(

    You have described the stages of dying very well, for both Sev amd Lily.

    I'm looking forward to your next update.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I really wish this fic would end happily, but it can't . . .

    Now I"M crying!

    The next chapter will be a rather bittersweet one, and it's just been posted.  And I've updated Dogsiter as well, so you could read that and hopefully be cheered up.  Thanks for reading and sorry I made you cry.

Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 3:34 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff*

    this had to be a hard chapter to write...im already in tears because of it....

    still it's a wonderful chapter...look forward to the next one

    Author's Response: The next one will be a little less sad.  it's when Harry gets Inky from Lily.
Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 3:25 am
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed) [Report This]
    It does have some similarites to the feeling of the titanic. I can imagine how hard it is to write. Have you ever considered writing, something origional. You could do it, I think. Like I said books and movies never provoke so much emotion from me as this story does.

    Author's Response:

    I have written several original novels, but none as sad as this one.  I'm currently looking for an agent to publish them.

    I do have one posted on fictioncentral .net under the penname Sevswife, Magician of Asgard, it's a retelling about Loki, Norse god of Mischief. You can check it out if you'd like.

Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 3:03 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Girl, I'm going through boxes of kleenex here!

    And now we come to Inky...

    Author's Response: Me too! And you're right . . .Inky comes next! Hooray!
Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 2:01 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was sad and enlightening at the same time, lily is trying to be strong and i admire her courage, harry when he's older will enjoy, well not enjoy as such but will learn alot about lily and what she went through in her last few months, sev bless him is fighting a losing battle though he is trying to come up with a cure for lupus

    Author's Response: yes, he will and hopefully appreciate what he learns from his mother.  Sev knows as well that it is a lost cause, but refuses to give up.  He will remain faithfully beside Lily until the end.
Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 1:58 am
Reviewer: Serenity Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG...I cried when I read this...I absolutely adore this story please update soon!!!!!!

    Author's Response:

    I will try, though I need a few minutes to recover from that.  These chapters take a lot out of me emotionally.

    But then, that's why I started writing HP Dogsitter, to balance them out with a funny story, you can check that out if you'd like, it's not at all sad.

Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ...

    What can I say?

    You described it beautifully. I love every single one of your stories. You certainly know how to make people cry. I'm bawling right now.

    I have a feeling the next chapter is going to be the last or very near to it. I have a feeling that Lily is going to slip away... Poor Sev... Poor Harry...

    Update soon.

    All my love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    I like it when I make you laugh better. 

    This story is a difficult one for me to write, since it brings to mind the last days of my friend Susan, who has passed away from ovarian cancer.

    So if you want to be amused, quick, read HP Dogsitter, it's therapy after reading this one!

Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 1:41 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *frown* This is getting really sad.

    Author's Response: yes and it's just going to get worse, so be prepared.
Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 1:36 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that was by far the most tear-jerking chapter yet, I could barely read the journal entries they were so sad and heartfelt. I hadnt really heard of lupus (except on 'house') but it seems like an awful awful disease for someone so young to have.

    Author's Response: it is, my friend's mother died of it when we were in college, she never got to see her daughter graduate.  Those journal entries I had to stop several times and wipe my eyes. 
Title: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008 1:23 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Sobbing here - sniffles. Lily was one brave lady.

    Author's Response: She was, and she is based upon my best friend Susan Keegan, who has since passed away from ovarian cancer, and much of this part of the book is drawn from her experiences at the end of her life, she shared a lot with me and her mother did as well, after she had died.  She too was a brave lady and she fought a good fight, she had undergone chemo five times since her cancer kept returning.  I don't think I'd ever be able to do that.

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