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Reviews For Where Shadows Go
and yes, I've started on this series too, since I have to wait for the other two...but that's okay, 'cause this one is JUST as good, if not better. =) ~shige Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate it! I hope you enjoy this one!
Author's Response: OMG! That would not be a good thing. At least my nephew only flushed action figures and toothbrushes.
Author's Response: So do I! I've been through that so many times!
Author's Response: Oh please keep reading, the ending is sad, but it's also a very powerful piece of writing and before the end there are some very sweet moments between Lily, Sev, & Harry. especially at Harry's party. The ending will make you cry, I won;t lie to you, but it's one of my best tearjerkers. So please read some more!
Author's Response: I know, it's really sad, but even wizards can get diseases and not just magical ones either. It's like how we can sometimes catch animal diseases from sick animals, like the swine flu. It's rare but it CAN happen. Poor Lily. Unfortunately, lupus is really hard for even magic to cure.
Author's Response: Great and thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Really? Thanks and I'm glad you like this so much!
Author's Response: Yes, harry is a little bundle of mischief, like a lot of two year olds I know. And it's a good thing you're not as bad as harry or even Fred and George, LOL! Poor Sev and Lily have their hands full.
Author's Response: I could do that, of course, if I wanted to, it would be an interesting twist. I'm glad you're enjoying this and you like the realism I tried to put in here, because I think it's important for a story to feel real to the reader, otherwise why bother reading it?
The handiling was good, but I would have slapped Petunia at least 50 times before they actually did. I would of slapped her even if I was Snape!!! I can't believe she did that, but I can understand how you make so she did, her despising eveeryone so much just for having something she didn't. I really hate her, and if I was Snape I would've grabbed Dudley when she had slapped Harry and slapped him. I hope they never get metioned again!!! Author's Response: They won't. Petunia will make one last appearance much later on in the story, but after that they are history. She is a very jealous and nasty woman! Sev would never hit a child the way Petunia hit Harry, not after what he's been through. Petunia was lucky he didn't hex her though. But he kept his cool like a mature adult and let Lily have a go at her sister instead. |
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