Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Where Shadows Go
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 1:28 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Such a lovely romantic chapter! Wish i was Lily and Sev was kissing ME like that!

    And the part with Petunia was really funny too!

    Author's Response: Me too! I'd probably faint, LOL!
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 1:23 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    yes! You kiss her, Sev! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 1:18 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome! I felt like I was there! And I loved the shared tales of their childhood and Vi's advice was just what Severus needed to hear.

    Author's Response: Yes it was and I think he took it to heart, don't you?
Title: Testing the Waters 17 Aug 2008 1:07 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! love the romance! And the pranks too. Lily and Sev sure had some time with Petunia. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'll be updating as fast as I can.  I love a good romance.
Title: Testing the Waters 16 Aug 2008 10:51 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a lovely date and a great kiss.

    Also, if Lily had picked on Petunia using magic the way she was laughing about, I could understand why would have such a fear of a magic child being around her non magic child. Think about it - the snippiness of Petunia was normal 14 - 16 year old angst.

    The "pranks" were magical in nature - something she couldn't defend against. And I didn't hear anything about parents stepping in and telling Lily that under no circumstances was Lily to use magic on Petunia.

    How you like to be a 15 year old and look in the mirror and see a pig face (and know your sister gave it to you)? Lots of fun for the pranker - not so much fun for the prankie.

    But I still loved it.

    Author's Response: You're right, but when Sev & lily were small, petunia picked on them unmercifully, locking them in closets and being nasty to Sev, and back then they couldn't control what their magic did.  When they were eleven, then yes they could, but by then Lily was trying to get some of her own back and I wanted to show that she wasn't the perfect princess some people make her out to be.  And there actually was a time when Vi and Hal forbade Lily to do magic around Petunia, they just haven't mentioned it yet.  But yes, that could be some of the reason why Petunis doesn't like magic, although the other part of it is that she's jealous and wants it herself. 
Title: Testing the Waters 16 Aug 2008 9:13 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) [Report This]
    This was VERY good! I LOVE this series!!!! It's AWESOME! I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it, i got one review that said they didn't think Severus acted normal, even though I specifically stated that this was an AU world that didn't follow canon.  That one kept asking where the death eaters were and why wasn't Severus a spy and said I didn't give enough background on Sev's past.  Sometimes people just don't read! Anyway, I have some big surprises for Sev & lily coming up soon!
Title: Testing the Waters 16 Aug 2008 2:56 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    there is a silly smile on my face :D
    that was just so sweet for their first kiss! i cant wait to see more of the love

    Author's Response: And there will be more of it, trust me! :)
Title: Testing the Waters 16 Aug 2008 2:54 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay Severus! This was such a great chapter! I love how Sev was awkward and shy first, but then he just went with what his heart was telling him. Beautiful!

    Author's Response: I love writing Severus in love, it's just so fun!
Title: Testing the Waters 16 Aug 2008 7:54 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw! Brought a smile to my face.

    Author's Response: Great that's what I hoped it would do!
Title: His Father's Son 15 Aug 2008 3:07 am
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus is such a good friend. :)

    Author's Response: He certainly is and he'll make an even better boyfriend, as you'll see.

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5