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Title: Never Second Best 11 Aug 2008 8:19 am
Reviewer: IdealismNausea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Though the opening scene was touching with little Ronnie, I feel as though I'm reading a story about a doctor named Bob, not Severus Snape. I understand that this is supposed to be an AU, but you've created a Leave it to Beaver sort of scenario toward the end that slowly grows in intensity. Yes, Severus is witty, but he's not a dork. And I seem to be getting that sort of vibe from his characterisation.

    Could we see more inner turmoil? Some Death Eater conflict? Could we catch a glimpse of Severus' background? It would certainly give credibility to the plot you've cooked up.

    Author's Response: If you read the sequel Never Again, which was written first, you'll see plenty of angst, and learn about Severus past with his father Tobias, which is not pretty.  Also, in this universe Sev was NEVER a Death Eater, there was no reason for him to be friends with Lucius since he had good friends in Remus, Sirius, Lily, and James as well.  More of Severus background will be discussed with Lily, he doesn't like to talk about it much, but with Lily he will.  And harry is not the BOY Who Lived either, since Voldemort was killed by James and Sirius permanently. In this fic you get to see a different side of Severus, the Healer not the spy. 
Title: Never Second Best 09 Aug 2008 8:01 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    ron was priceless. lord i love the twins!

    n e way. great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yeah, aren't they hilarious! Troublemakers extraordinaire!
Title: Never Second Best 09 Aug 2008 6:57 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor innocent Ronnie, doesn't he know you should never listen to the twins? I had to laugh when he said he’d stuff beans up George’s nose next time! Does the kid ever learn? Lol. Glad the Weasleys made an appearance in your story :) they are some of my fav characters.

    Sirius and Remus did well. That part with Sirius offering to tell Lily Sev would die if she didn’t go out with him was great! lol. You know you can trust Remus though, so that really helped Sev with the convincing. The whole cinnamon buns issue at the end was funny too, hehe.

    I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm happy Sev is finally going to talk to Lily and I'm sure once the awkwardness ends things will go just fine :)

    Author's Response:

    Nope, he's a typical boy, LOL! They'll be back in this one too, soon as Sev & Lily tie the know and Harry is two.  Sirius and Remus really want their 'brother' Severus to be happy and Remus knows what he's talking about!

    Sev and Lily will be fine once they get together, but first Severus must trust Lily.

Title: More Than A Friend 08 Aug 2008 11:46 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    loved it!

    Author's Response: Thanks, and just wait till you see what happens next!
Title: Great Balls of Fire 08 Aug 2008 11:31 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *cracks up laughing!* that was realy good!
    on to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: yeah, isn't it nice they all got to have a sing-a-long with baby Harry!
Title: Never Second Best 07 Aug 2008 10:06 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! THIS IS SUCH A SWEET STORY! I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE PLEEEAZZE!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm working on it! :)
Title: Never Second Best 07 Aug 2008 10:00 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! Molly and Ron were adorable! Can they make a reappearance? And I love how Siri and Remus convinced Sev to go talk to Lily.

    Author's Response: yes they'll be reappearing in later chapters.  Thanks for your review!
Title: Never Second Best 07 Aug 2008 9:51 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it! I was laughing so hard, pleas eupdate soon, I need to know what happens. Go, Sev! take a chance, you won't regret it.

    Author's Response: Never thought he would! And you'll see how the talk goes soon!
Title: Never Second Best 07 Aug 2008 9:48 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww! That was so cool, and my grandson did something similar when he was that age. Please put more of them in here. And I hope Lily makes sure that Sev knows she loves him for himself and not just because James is dead and she needs a husband and father for Harry.

    Author's Response: She will believe me.  Severus will have no doubt that she loves him.  The bean thing seems to be pretty common, I think most kids have tried it or a variation of it.
Title: Never Second Best 07 Aug 2008 9:46 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Ron and Molly and Sev was great too, the way he handled them! Poor guy, he's so insecure it makes my heart ache. But maybe Lily can convince him that she loves him for himself. Update soon.

    Author's Response: Yes, but hopefully Lily can convince him otherwise.

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