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Title: More Than A Friend 04 Aug 2008 5:08 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I really like how you're developing Lily, she's very beleivable and so are her feelings for Severus.

    Author's Response: I tried to make lily into a well-rounded character, because in the books she sometimes seems almost perfect.
Title: More Than A Friend 04 Aug 2008 4:16 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Finally Lily's beginning to realize what's right in front of her eyes. Hope all goes well and can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks, more will be coming soon.
Title: More Than A Friend 04 Aug 2008 4:14 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    That was sweet! I hope the two Aurors can convince Severus to go out with Lily again. It was funny to hear them reminisce about James too.

    Author's Response: You'll see, won't you? Just keep reading!
Title: More Than A Friend 03 Aug 2008 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice work! Looking forward to more! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying this little romance I've got going.
Title: More Than A Friend 03 Aug 2008 11:14 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    aww im glad sirius and remus approved straight way, it should be fun to see the way they convince sev to show his feelings!

    Author's Response: yeah, they want Lily to be happy and she and Sev do deserve each other. 
Title: More Than A Friend 03 Aug 2008 8:10 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Lily is starting to move on and realizes she has feelings for Sev. Remus and Sirius's words were very true, James would want her to be happy and Sev loves her and Harry loads.

    I bet Sev will be shocked when he finds out Lily returns his feelings. I hope his friends can convince him that it’s true and to take a chance, I'm anxious to see things flow together for Sev and Lily. Can't wait to read more! Please post again when you can ^_^

    Author's Response: Oh he will indeed, since he dared not hope for more.  And Siri and Moony will try their hardest to convince him to take a second chance on the love that was lost.  Don't worry! 
Title: More Than A Friend 03 Aug 2008 7:27 am
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *sniff* poor Severus - that must've been so hard for him. Nice that lily now recognizes it - I hope she can somehow convey the idea to Severus in their dates that he is not second-best.

    Author's Response: It was, but he never let anyone know.  And Lily will find some way to show him that she loves him completely now.  But first he has to believe in himself again, which is where Sirius and Remus and Vi and Hal come in.
Title: Great Balls of Fire 02 Aug 2008 10:18 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    can i take out my ear-plugs now? poor harry having to contend with sevvys singing, i do feel sorry for him.
    i'm glad harry really enjoyed the quidditch match, though he did get abit hyper but him enjoying himself is the main thing

    Author's Response: What, you don't think Sev can sing? LOL! Rickman did a pretty good job of it in Sweeney Todd. Harry really did enjoy himself and so did the rest of them.  And they even managed to get the kid to sleep at a decent hour too!
Title: Great Balls of Fire 02 Aug 2008 9:29 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is so manipulative! I loved how he got Sev to sing along with him ^_^ I remember hearing that song a lot when I was little since my mom had it on a tape and played it in the car when we went on trips. Sirius and Mat sure had a blast, poor Sev, so embarrassed! I know I’d never live it down, were I in his place :D.

    Harry sure is a whirlwind! He can be the sweetest thing, a little brat, and always manages to melt your heart. I love reading the interaction between him and the adults, hope to read more soon!

    P.S. Will the Weasleys make an appearance in this story?

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry is the king of toddler manipulators! LOL! Those big green eyes and pathetic pouting lips! Poor Sev didn't have a prayer.  And he'll be hearing about this for a long time, given that Sirius and Matthew saw.  Yes, i think the Weasleys will be appearing a little later on, and maybe so will a young Dudley and Petunia and Vernon.
Title: Great Balls of Fire 02 Aug 2008 7:28 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    That was just hilarious, Sev singing with Harry and two of his best friends there to tease him LOL. Love that Sev took Harry to the Quidditch match and that Harry had a ball some real bonding between Harry and Sev. Also happy that Lily got a girls night to relax

    Author's Response: Yeah, they all needed some male bonding time, LOL! And Lily needed some time to do some girl stuff too, time that she didn't get even when James was alive because she had to watch Harry. 

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