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Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 30 Jul 2008 2:36 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, but then when isn't there? Loved the way Sev & Lily dealt with Harry together and Harry saying Sev was mean. And I also enjoyed the quarrel reconciliation bit, Lockhart is an ass.

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I agree about lockhart.
Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 30 Jul 2008 12:23 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    you know the more i read this story the more i dont want lily to die! (i mean i know she has to or you would have to re write 2 other stories! lol) but their relationship is just so sweet it makes me smile every time i read a new chapter! i loved the tantrum that harry had with him calling sev meanie, too cute! looking forward to the interesting bath time and a good ole sing song lol

    Author's Response: I know, and I'm going to hate writing the end of this fic, because I'm going to be crying all over my keyboard.  But this was originally intended to be a bittersweet story, with lots of love, laughter, and tears.  And yes, at that age, anybody who punishes them is classed as mean, LOL!
Title: Of Tantrums and Conmen 30 Jul 2008 7:45 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus singing can't wait for that. Really great chapter, you can really see the small developments of a loving family starting to form. Can't wait to see the next one. Keep up the awesome work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Lindsey!

    I really appreciate your reviewing all my chapters!

    And yes, they are slowly starting to come together and in a few more chapters you'll see Sev & Lily's relationship develop even more, as Lily starts to realize just what she has in Severus.  Which is, of course, the love of a lifetime.

Title: Bittersweet Memories 30 Jul 2008 5:53 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I loved it, especially the part where Harry is reading Goodnight Moon. My grandkids LOVE that book and I've bought it for every baby shower I ever attended too! I'm glad Lily has Sev and Moony and Siri looking out for her.

    Author's Response: Thanks and I love Goodnight Moon too it's a classic!
Title: Bittersweet Memories 30 Jul 2008 5:44 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww, this was too cute! I loved it!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Bittersweet Memories 30 Jul 2008 1:45 am
Reviewer: Romado (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this story I like Sev and gang being freinds.

    Author's Response: Thanks and wait till you see what happens after this chapter.
Title: Bittersweet Memories 29 Jul 2008 6:19 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I love the way Sev cares for Lily and the part with reading Goodnight Moon to harry was so adorable! Aww!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I love Goodnight Moon, it's one of my fave kids books!
Title: Bittersweet Memories 28 Jul 2008 2:52 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Another brilliant chapter. You portray Lily's grief very well. Sev's concern for her is so touching. As for Harry .. .too cute! Goodnight Moon is an awesome book, my kids loved it! And the crazy stuff james and Sirius did, very typical of them!

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Although I've never lost a husband, my mother had a friend who did, and I tried to capture what she told me and incorporate it into Lily's character.  I love Goodnight Moon too!
Title: Bittersweet Memories 28 Jul 2008 11:09 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i can definitely see the teacher side of you come out. i never read that book in school.

    i love all the crazy stories about James. You never cease to amaze me!

    Author's Response: And you never had it read to you either??? OMG! It's one of the most popular kid's books ever.  A real bestseller!  Yeah James was quite the troublemaker!  Which is where Harry gets it from!
Title: Bittersweet Memories 28 Jul 2008 6:00 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m really happy to see this update! I'm officially attached to yet another one of your stories, soon as I send this review along I'm adding it to my favorites :)

    Sev's advice was really good! Glad Lily is going to follow through with it. Now that Lily realizes Sev loves her, perhaps it will help along the healing process of her heart as well. Lord knows how hard losing her husband must be for her. It's good they went through James things, seems the memories helped out a bit.

    I adore little Harry, he's so cute! It’s sweet how he clings to Sev and Sirius's comment about where he and Remus stand was funny :). I loved how Harry begged and manipulated Sev into reading the story over again, ^_^ I want to steel the little cutie. Man was it sad to hear him ask for his dad though ;_;.

    Hope to see another update soon! As well as for Lily to continue improving.

    Author's Response: Yay! Hopefully Lily will begin to heal with the help of her parents as well as Severus and Harry.  But it will, as she said, take time.  And yes, harry is adorable, though, as you'll see in the next chapter, he isn't always so well behaved.  He does have his moments of tantrums and crankiness like any other child, but he also has Sev wrapped around his finger.  Except Sev doesn't realize that yet, haha! 

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