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Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 5:22 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ...

    Beautiful.

    Need I say more?

    Love always,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    No, you said it all! :)

    Thanks, Jewels!

Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 4:58 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I didn't sob as badly on that one. I have buried too many people that I love and I know how it sorrow goes (In one three month span, I lost my mum, my favorite uncle, and my grandmum.)

    In a way it is a release to know that they will go on and love again.

    Now, I get to go back and reread your other stories in this series.

    But you did a very good thing. In JKRs work, Lily is a shadowy figure. Here, you brought her to life and gave her a being of herself - not mother who gave her life for her son, a woman who loved and laughed and argued. Thank you.

    And that is why I like fanfiction. It feels in the empty holes.

    If a book or a tv series ends well, I rarely read fanfiction about it. Babylon 5 and the Lord of the Rings were great and I just don't need to read anything more about it.

    But the HP universe and the Buffy universe just didn't end right - so that is the fanfiction I read.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I know how that goes.  This past three months, three of my relatives died, two of cancer and one of an anyeurism unexpectedly.  Awful!

    I agree about Lily, to me she was never really given enough depth as a character.  Even in DH she seemed rather flat and well . . .shallow, i guess. 

    So I wanted to flesh her out and make her real, like my friend Susan, who would have loved this fic, if she had lived to read it, always said--you make me feel as if I know her.  I'm happy you all got to know my Lily and that she meant so much to you for all to mourn her at the end. 

    Again, I agree about the ending of HP, it didn't end right, or rather it ended right for some and others, like Sev and Fred, got cheated. 

Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 3:17 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i love Celine Dion. title very expressive.thank you for this amazing,touching story.i hope you will write new amazing stories.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I'm currently working on anew short fic in this sereis called Harry Potter Dogsitter, so you could read that if you'd like.
Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 2:51 pm
Reviewer: Kerowyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Bravo! I loved the end, even though it also made me cry. But that's ok, it honored Lily's memory. I'm glad Severus gets a happy ending. Now I'm off to read the other stories in your series.

    Author's Response: Thanks, hope you enjoy them!
Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 2:49 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fantastic story! I loved it even though it made me bawl my eyes out! Now I've got to read HP Dogsitter!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I just posted a new chapter of it too!
Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 1:53 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Just fantastic. I have loved reading this even through the really sad bits. I cant wait to see how they all get on in the next part of the story with Harry and Lexy at Hogwarts! : )

    Author's Response: That ought to be a really awesome ride, huh? And remember Eileen will be there too somehow.
Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 10:27 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a nice story even though it turned so sad in the last few chapters. It must be hard to write something so sad without slipping to over-emotional or to pathos. Good job! Mila

    Author's Response: it so definitely is, there was so much angst in here that I had to escape it several times and work on my other fic so I wouldn't get so depressed that I couldn't write the ending.  It's always difficult to balance strong emotional chapters, and I'm glad I managed to do so.  Thanks, Mila!
Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 10:08 am
Reviewer: Abby (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thought your stories were wonderful, though it was sad how lily died. Please write more.

    Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm working on an other short piece called Harry Potter Dogsitter right now, check it out if you want!
Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 8:10 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    From the moment you started the story we all knew how it was going to end, but it still did not prepare me for it... I cried. I could count on one hand stories that truly made me cry. I loved this story even knowing that Sev eventually does find love again is a small comfort... imagining him on the bed crying for her just broke my heart.
    Thank you for writing this incredible story

    Author's Response: Aww . . .this was such a poignant scene, that part when he starts really letting himself feel her loss made me very sad, i felt so bad doing that to him.
Title: My Heart Will Go On 29 Nov 2008 8:03 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff* that was beautiful! a wonderful end to the story!

    i shall have to go on to your other stories now!

    Author's Response: Thanks! My other stories won't be half as angsty, I think!

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