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Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 05 Dec 2021 8:19 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good stert
Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 24 Oct 2013 1:34 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    What an interesting beginning.
Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 26 Sep 2013 5:52 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting first chapter. I liked the way the story is framed as an answer to a question. Going from Harry's memories back to Harry in the present breaks things up nicely.
Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 23 Oct 2008 8:03 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying this, it's an excellent beginning. There are just a few wee corrections that would clean it up. Your story's so good, it deserves to be as perfect as you can make it.
Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 18 Jul 2008 7:05 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great beginning! I like how Harry is talking with the students and telling them the story of how he beat Voldemort.

    So Harry has already graduated now? Is it because he's considered to already know what he needs now that he's beaten Voldemort, or is the whole schedule set so that all the students graduate instead of their being seven years at Hogwarts?

    I like how you've implied that things have changed drastically for Harry and Severus.
Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 09 Jul 2008 4:18 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very good start to what I believe will be quite an interesting story. reading on now...
Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 08 Jul 2008 5:46 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmmm,Good begining, this definitely has potential.
Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 06 Jul 2008 4:59 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the idea, the Order Of The Phoenix was my favorite. Even though Sirius died, :(
    I will be looking for more. Will you go into detail about how Severus is still alive...and why in the world is he calling Severus 'dad'? Lol, :)
    Scorpia

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review Scorpia.  This is my first fic that isn't a one-shot and I'm a little nervous about how it's going to turn out and if people will like it. 

    Truth be told, I didn't like Order of the Phoenix as much as I liked some of the other books.  It was too close to home, I was about 16 when it came out and I hadn't had a very good year when I was 15, not as bad as Harry, but still not great.  I liked Prisoner of Azkaban the best.  I was lucky enough to have a teacher in my high school that was very much like Lupin, so much so, that one of my friends and I actually codenamed that teacher Lupin.  

    As for how Sev is a live, and why Harry is calling him dad, you're just gonna have to wait and see.

Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 06 Jul 2008 2:18 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice work!

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