| Title: Topsy-Turvy
| 05 Dec 2021 8:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I am surprised Sirius knew and he didnt dislike Harry for it. He was better man than Snape thought.
I really wanted to read this story, but the format is bothering me. It's ok to be different, but I just don't like the format of Harry telling the story like this to the entire school. It just seems not plausible to air his laundry like this in front of the entire school... in front of a friend maybe but not all the young kids and everyone.
If Molly didn't already know what was going on, she certainly does now. I'm curious to find out whether Snape knows that Harry is his son.
Just a few typos to be cleared up: NOT "The two of them did along very well when they were in school together.”, BUT:"The two of them did NOT GET along very well..."
I like what you're doing with this story very much!
I really enjoyed this chapter, too. Of course it's got to be hard for Harry to find out the truth this way, but I think ultimately he'll be very glad.
Will we ever get to know the contents of the letter? And why didn't Severus know about Harry?
| Title: Topsy-Turvy
| 08 Jul 2008 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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Sooo, I'm wondering, WHO finds the letter.good chapter,I amlooking forward to more.
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