| Title: Birth of the DA
| 05 Dec 2021 9:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I like the way it goes between the two perspectives.
You definitely deserve more than 2 and a half stars for this chapter. Let me rectify that.
And of course Snape would be unemotional, he has not accepted Harry as his son yet.
Great chapter in progressing things in their relationship, with the introduction of Occlumency.
Hearing about how Harry started DA was interesting as was the business of finding a place to hold meetings. I would have thought that former Maurader Sirius would know about the Room of Requirement but it didn't sound like it. I was glad that Arthur killed Nagini. One horcrux down.
| Title: Birth of the DA
| 06 Jan 2009 8:28 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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The last two chapters appear to be different from the start of this fic, they are merely recaps of the canon story without the emotional background of either Harry or Severus, or without Severus own thought as to what was going on from his pov during that time frame.
| Title: Birth of the DA
| 05 Jan 2009 10:52 pm
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| Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Anonymous)
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I like that you are telling this from Harry's perspective. Would like to see some Snape/Harry interaction soon though!
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