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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Topsy-Turvy 24 Oct 2013 4:38 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    I am surprised Sirius knew and he didnt dislike Harry for it. He was better man than Snape thought.
Title: Year That Trembled and Reel'd Beneath Me 24 Oct 2013 1:34 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    What an interesting beginning.
Title: Making Plans 24 Oct 2013 1:15 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I was glad that when Harry realized that Severus wanted him to stay the summer so that they could get to know each other better, he was so emphatic about staying with his dad. Severus is taking his new role as father very seriously. Harry had better mind his P's and Q's.

    Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the father-son interaction. I think Harry is happy to have someone who finally wants him. Yes, he'd better mind those pc's and A's, but it's Harry so he can only behave for so long. Severus is taking his responsibility seriously. He doesn't want to be anything like Tobias.
Title: Making Plans 23 Oct 2013 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! This is the first time that they've actually had a father-son conversation. Love the bonding moments.

    I'm so glad that Snape finally sees Harry for who he is and is vowing to protect and take care of him.

    Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: It took them awhile, but they're getting there. Glad you enjoyed the father-son stuff, there's more to come.
Title: Making Plans 23 Oct 2013 10:01 pm
Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Predictable that Harry would think of Grandmother Evans instead of Grandmother Snape.
    I'm glad Severus talked about backup plans with Harry. Life is uncertain at best.

    Author's Response: Thanks for commenting Bianca. If anyone should know about life not going as planned, it's these two. Harry has had more trouble in his young life than most adults. Severus had plans for the future, but lost them to poor choices. They have also gained from life's unexpected turns. Severus never expected to have a child, let alone one with Lily. He has one now. Harry thought the only family he had hated him. Now he has a father looking out for him. I like the fact they set aside the hanging cloud of doom that is the prophecy and are looking at Harry's future as if he were any other kid.
Title: Walking the Fence 17 Oct 2013 2:19 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting that Sirius didn't make any effort to find out about Harry's home life and then got annoyed when Severus, who hadn't liked Harry, managed to find out. So fixated on Snape that is all that he sees.
Title: Walking the Fence 17 Oct 2013 12:49 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!! Not Umbridge!!

    Yikes! Things COULD get worse. I hope that Snape comes to the rescue or something.

    Great chapter and I'm glad that Snape is treating Harry better.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
Title: Getting to Know You 10 Oct 2013 2:48 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm a 3 sugar person myself so I sympathize with Severus on that one. Though I don't care for plain black. I am enjoying the interaction between Harry and Severus. You've done a nice job with the speech patterns of the characters - Severus more dignified and Harry more casual. I tend to internally cringe when I read a story where Severus uses lots of slang because it just doesn't seem like the way he would talk.

    Author's Response: I personally take my tea black with 1 or 2 sugar. I'm glad you like the different speech styles. You're right they would speak differently. I too don't care for stories where Shape uses lots of slang.
Title: Getting to Know You 10 Oct 2013 12:42 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad that Snape and Harry are starting to get to know each other. I wonder what Snape will say when he really finds out what the Dursleys have done to his son.

    Can't wait to find out what happens next.

    Author's Response: I can't imagine what more he could do to them. Thanks for commenting. See you next week, when we check in with Sirius.
Title: Can We Start Again, Please? 03 Oct 2013 4:04 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    You have hooked me on your story. I decided to give it a chance and I've found myself anxious for the next updates!

    I can't wait to find out more about how Harry and Snape 's relationship grew to them having a real Father and Son relationship.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  From here, there's a lot of focus on Harry and Sev's relationship.  See you next Wed.

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