| Title: Chapter Two - Convincing Uncle Severus
| 18 Jul 2008 3:16 pm
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| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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I really like this story so far. Little Harry is going to have a very interesting life. Hopefully, Sirius will be more mature this time around.
| Title: Chapter Two - Convincing Uncle Severus
| 18 Jul 2008 12:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love this story! I've never seen this before- what a great idea! Please write more soon!
| Title: Chapter Two - Convincing Uncle Severus
| 18 Jul 2008 6:29 am
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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I think Severus would be a good stabilising factor not only for Harry but for Sirius and Remus as well. As Dumbledore knows the truth about Peter now they can save Sirius, but with Sev helping his status as spy is forever lost and that may be good...he is best serving the side of good by being Harry's guardian more than being a spy. Sirius and Remus will have to hear from Harry himself that he wants Sev as his guardian otherwise they may not accept him.
| Title: Chapter One - Changing The Future
| 15 Jul 2008 1:44 am
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| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
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This is a great beginning and I can't wait to see the reactions on the other two faces when they find out who they have to raise harry with! It's my guess that Sev & Remus will be the disciplinarians there? This sort of reminds me of an old movie Three men and a Baby, but the baby was a little girl raised by 3 friends who were bachelors. This should be a really funny story, in some parts.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it. You are right Sev and Remus will be the disciplinarians but mostly Sev I think, not 100% sure yet. Uncle Sirius will be the fun uncle, one to get Harry into trouble with pranks. Three Men and a Baby is where I got the idea from. :)
| Title: Chapter One - Changing The Future
| 14 Jul 2008 4:21 pm
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| Reviewer: researchgirl (Anonymous)
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This is an interesting idea that I haven't seen before in quite this form.
However it is difficult to read as your use of tenses is so inconsistent - switching back and forth between present tense and past tense.
I suggest you find a beta reader before posting another chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. I got myself a beta and fixed the chapters I had posted.
| Title: Chapter One - Changing The Future
| 13 Jul 2008 9:44 pm
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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Oh, this is a great begining.Poor Snape(giggle)a joint gaurdianship with Remus and Sirius how will he survive it.This story has a lot of potential.
Author's Response: Thank you.
| Title: Chapter One - Changing The Future
| 13 Jul 2008 6:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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Love it, your chapter held me reading I was sorry it ended. I assume that Harry is going to inform the others about Sirius not being the secret keeper and about Peter being the traitor...is he also going to tell them about other events like the chamber or about voldie's return etc...anyway looking forward to whatever you write next
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. You are correct Harry will inform them of Sirius' innocence and where to find Peter soon. But not sure he will devulge about the chamber.........chan't have Severus totally prepared for Harry's hyperness eh. lol
| Title: Chapter One - Changing The Future
| 13 Jul 2008 4:38 pm
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| Reviewer: ER (Anonymous)
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Well, that should be interesting, Sirius, Remus, and Severus working together to raise Harry. I look forward to more.
NO complaining Snape... It could be James and Sirius.... So WHAT NOW!!!
Oh my goodness I absolutely love the idea behind this story. I know people have had kind of the same premise going on, but this is totally unique. I am really looking forward to where this is going next. Kudos on your great idea. Keep up the awesome work and please update again soon. LES
Author's Response: Thank you I was hoping it hadn't been done before. :)
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