| Title: Chapter 2
| 11 Apr 2009 9:34 pm
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| Reviewer: HeartStar (Anonymous)
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I love this please update when you can ! Also How do I save stories to my favorites I do not know how?
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Great story. I think a brightly colored parrot suits Dumbles perfectly. I cannot wait for more, thanks for sharing this.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 04 Apr 2009 7:51 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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looking forward to them getting back to Hogwarts. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Cute chapter.I loved the way Harry just says whatever he hears, that is sooo true of little ones. loved it hope the next chapter is out soon. (and maybe one for "Painful Guardianship" too, please)
Oh and I forgot to mention, I also liked when Severus calls Harry 'tyke' since that's Yorkshire for 'child' and Snape grew up there according to canon and would use Yorkshire dialect if he wished.
I never would either, I was so mad at her for killing Severus!
This chapter was adorable. I loved how Sev plays with Harry, tickling him with the feather, and how he is conned into playing fairies with him, LOL!
But the best part was when he called Albus an old coot! I was laughing out loud. Leave it to the kid to tell it like it is. And then he told him he was a three-year-old in a grown-up's body. Is that ever the truth! Actually I think Albus is Peter Pan in disguise.
I'm curious though. Why would Sev need to buy spells? Can't he just learn and cast them?
Looks like we both had fun with Albus, 'cause in my fic Broken Wings, I have Harry call him an arrogant ignoramus, only Albus can't understand him since he's a hawk, only Snape can.
Anyway, loved it!
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