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Reviews For Repairing the Damage
I wonder what Severus will answer to the next question. It should be interesting. Good work! The only thing I noticed was that you didn't capitalize Potions Master, I think it's supposed to be capitalized. Author's Response: Thanks :) And I've actually been quite conflicted regarding potions master/Potions Master. It is a title so I thought that it should really be capitalized, but then when I capitalized it, I always thought it looked odd and changed it back haha.
I love the emotion, and you really connect to the characters. You write beautifully, and your grammar and spelling are really good too! Author's Response: Yes, I would like to think that Snape eventually cuts him a bit of slack. We'll see in the next few chapters :) And thank you so much. I've been having trouble with Snape's emotions particularly, because he has such a complex personality and often reacts in unexpected ways. I hope that I am somewhat doing J.K.R.'s wonderful characters justice. Especially Snape... I love Snape. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me a bunch of reviews. It's very encouraging :)
Author's Response: I thought Dumbledore deserved to be told off :) Also, I find Snape very amusing when he is angry because of his temper, so that was definitely fun to write. Honestly, I am not entirely sure as to when I will have Harry return to school. I've been debating upon this for a long time and I still don't know. And yes, Snape will definitely be tutoring him so he won't fall behind. Can you really imagine Snape letting him be lazy and neglect his studies for too long? I'm not sure how much we'll see written about the tutoring though. It will probably only be mentioned somewhat vaguely here and there. Thanks a lot for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I'll definitely keep on going. I'm planning on beginning to write the next chapter tonight so it should be up within the next few days. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: I will. Thanks a lot for the review! :)
Seriously though, you're doing a great job so far. I'm looking forward to your next update. Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Seriously though, you're doing a great job so far. I'm looking forward to your next update.
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