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Title: Inexcusable Actions 29 Jul 2010 2:48 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Way to go Sev!

    Isn't it ironic that Severus is championing for Harry, after not even wanting to go check up on him.

    This story is really good Kaona. I'm so glad that I took the time to read it! :)

    Onto the next chappie. :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you're glad that you took the time to read it :) Thank you so much for the review!
Title: The Cupboard Under the Stairs 29 Jul 2010 2:12 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Poor Harry. What a brute that man is.

    I love Harry though; he still only thinks of others.

    Great beginning Kaona! Onto the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Yes, he is definitely a brute. And thanks :)
Title: The Cupboard Under the Stairs 29 Jul 2010 1:53 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a really good start! Vernon is such a horrible person that the alcohol makes it even worse. Instead of just pourng the alcohol down the sink (which is what I used to make underage college students do when I caught them sneaking alcohol into my dorm--I was a security desk officer back then, they so hated that, because they usually didn't have money to buy more and they were reported too) Harry should have drugged the beer or whatever with a Sleeping Draft or sleeping pills dissolved in it. That would have kept Vernon out.

    But then Harry would have had no reason for Sev to rescue him . . .unless Vern found out.

    And Albus should know about the cupboard under the stairs since all Harry's Hogwarts letters were addressed there. Unless nobody reads the addresses . . .

    I'm glad at least Petunia was willing to feed Harry, she should thank God Harry's so forgiving!

    Author's Response: Yes, I've left whether they knew Harry had been living in the cupboard under the stairs as somewhat of a mystery, I suppose. I don't remember ever reading about it in the books and I just couldn't decide which way I wanted it to go. I also decided that Dumbledore, being such a brilliant man, would have picked up on the signs of abuse even more than others and since that is such incriminating evidence against him, I felt that whether he did or didn't know about the cupboard didn't matter as much since he has so many things against him. And Petunia should definitely be thankful that Harry's so forgiving. I would like to believe that Petunia was both thankful that Harry kind of protecting them from harm, and her finally growing a small amount of a conscience, is what led her to try to do what she could for Harry without putting herself or her son in harm's way.
Title: Avoiding Conflicts 28 Jul 2010 8:57 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how long Severus will be able to keep up appearances for Voldemort and his lackeys? Will he be able to keep himself from being nicer to Harry in public or will he slip?

    Author's Response: You've posed a very interesting question. Thanks so much for the review. It really means a lot :)
Title: Avoiding Conflicts 27 Jul 2010 8:44 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good to see an update :)

    Author's Response:

    I know, right? Haha. I really have neglected this, unfortunately. What I've done lately is try to post a minimum of one chapter per month, which I think is fairly reasonable. It's really just a matter of getting (and staying motivated), and keeping at it even when I run into writer's block.  Thank you so much for the review :) 

Title: Avoiding Conflicts 27 Jul 2010 2:18 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good that Harry apologized and set the tone for Snape. I think Snape being a teacher just figured out a way to keep Harry busy, and Harry might just find out what it means to be in a "caring" environment as I expect Snape will check his homework like most parents do.

    Author's Response: Of course he would :) I'm not sure if Snape would tell himself that he was checking Harry's homework like most parents do, I think he'd prefer to tell himself that he was doing it to make sure Harry wasn't slacking. And because it's what teachers do. Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Avoiding Conflicts 27 Jul 2010 12:20 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I ove this I hope to see more soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much :) This is actually the chapter that I'm the most proud of so far. I spent a really long time editing it and trying to make as close to perfect as I could.
Title: Owls and Uproars 12 Mar 2010 7:30 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Dumbledore is a real piece of work, isn't he? Harry was badly beaten by Vernon Dursley and yet, the old fogey wants to send him back into that man's grasp. I'm glad that Severus has decided to protect Harry from those that would do harm to him, up to and including Albus Dumbledore himself. I hope that Severus will be able to gain Harry's trust and that he will in the end decide to accept his protection.

    Great chapter! I hope to see an update soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks :)
Title: Owls and Uproars 20 Dec 2008 8:21 am
Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Signed) [Report This]
    Will we see what Hermione and Ron's reactions are? Will Harry learn about Dumbledore's insistence that he return to his relatives, and would he be angry about that or more resigned?

    Author's Response: Yes, you will see what Hermione and Ron's reactions are. However, I'm not sure whether that will be in the next chapter or in a few more. But you will definitely see them eventually. Harry will learn very soon about Dumbledore's insistence that he returns to his relatives. I'm pretty sure he'd be angry about that but I haven't entirely made up my mind yet. I apologise for spoiling little bits and pieces of the next few chapters for you. But I tend to try to answer questions as much as I can so there you have it. Thanks a lot for your review! :)
Title: Owls and Uproars 01 Dec 2008 1:40 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    this is great! i can't wait for you to continue

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :)

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