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Reviews For Faith
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad they managed to stay in character, even through the emotional bits!
I mean - Snape might have done something bad in past, but reminding it this way is as if he didn¨t atone himself through the years or like saying "i still think you are still the same bad guy, Snape!" Just my opinion. I like your fanfic, don¨t think I do not. Writer must write sad, violent or cruel things too, if needed for the story - I understand that. Mila Author's Response: I don't think that Dumbledore is unnecessarily cruel; I think he recognizes that Snape would appreciate being treated as an eminently rational man (he prides himself, after all, on his ability to separate emotion from judgment), as opposed to being coddled. Consider how Snape treats everyone else -- "if you can dish it, you can take it", eh? Dumbledore isn't reminding Snape of his debts (or for that matter, thinking Snape is "still the same bad guy" -- if he did, he would hardly be trusting Snape to the degree that he does) so much as reminding him of his role in this war. Their difference of opinion is not so much one of emotion or guilt (for all that emotion is involved) but of strategy: Dumbledore believes in this plan he has concocted, and believes in Harry, whereas Snape doubts Harry (and Dumbledore is sacrificing himself to give Harry the opportunity to kill Voldemort), and does not believe that his own position is worth that of the ostensible general of the Light. I understand that this discussion is separate from your evaluation of my fiction. Don't worry; I am rather difficult to offend. Thank you for reviewing (again)! ~Aethyr
Author's Response: I'm not a fan of the "for the greater good" mentality either, but I can sympathize with Dumbledore, in some respects. He is confronted daily with some of the most difficult decisions in the entire Wizarding world; one mistake on his part could mean the deaths of thousands of innocents. For all that he loves certain people (like Harry, for instance, as we see at the end of book five), he has to harden his heart against his desire to spare them at the expense of the rest of the world, because as a general and a leader, he cannot show such favoritism. He assumes, I think, that everyone should be as willing to make sacrifices as he is himself, and so he believes that his choices will someday be understood, if not forgiven. I don't think he doesn't care about Snape, far from it; Dumbledore cares for him a great deal, but realizes that Snape is the only person who can win them the war. He is willing to ask much of Snape, because he demands as much, or perhaps more, of himself. Thank you for reviewing!
Interesting that Snape and Harry are stuck in the castle all alone, I bet Dumbledore planned for even that so that there won't be any interruptions. Please keep writing when you have time! I know that school gets in the way of a lot of things. Author's Response: Thank you; I'm so glad you liked it! I always try to "play" the dialogue in my head, like a film clip, to make sure it sounds realistic and in-character. I'm glad you think it works. Well, with regard to Harry's opinion, we shall see, in coming chapters. You can be sure that Dumbledore had a hand in it, as he seems to, in almost everything. I will definitely keep writing; I'm curious, too, to see where this is going. I'm a pretty spontaneous writer -- my characters call the shots -- so I'm along for the ride, too.
Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad to hear that you think it has potential. I just updated; hope you enjoy the next chapter just as much!
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