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Reviews For Faith
I understand the lure of fanfiction when one has college papers to research and write.... I spent many hours scribbling fanfic when I ought to have been studying. Thank you for giving us these wonderful chapters despite your busy-ness with school. Well done! Author's Response: You've articulated very well one of the reasons why I write; it's heady stuff, having that sort of hold over a reader, if only while the magic lasts. Thank you for your kind words. ~Aethyr
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words -- they are well appreciated.
And the ending...well, I just loved it and I'm so glad that Harry and Severus can finally see the truth and that Severus offered Harry comfort. I can't wait for your next chapter. Author's Response: I'm very glad that you enjoyed it! I very much agree that the cave incident is, in the book, rather overshadowed by the subsequent death and destruction. I've always thought that it should have been more traumatic than it was portrayed to be. And Snape, of course, does recognize the rather ironic parallel between the two incidents. The next chapter is in the works, and should not take as long as this one to complete, never fear. Thank you for your review, and for your kind words. Pax, Aethyr
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you thought so! With regard to the updating, I am working on the next chapters of all my stories, and will post at more frequent intervals, now that school is no longer in session. Thanks for reviewing! Pax, Aethyr
Author's Response: Thank you; I'm flattered that you think so highly of my work! I had some of the same criticisms when I read Deathly Hallows, and I reckon I may have been subconsciously compensating for them as I wrote this. Pax, Aethyr
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have to keep improving then, eh? *knocks on wood*
Author's Response: I am very well pleased that you are enjoying it, and that it has had some resonance. I've always thought the two scenes (the cave and the tower scenes) to be uncannily parallel, especially reading them one right after the other. Thank you for reviewing!
Since you specifically ask, I think Snape removing Harry's glasses is a bit too deliberate a gesture. If he's hugging Harry, I think it has to be a more abrupt thing than that. Tears are messy. Getting your glasses smooshed against someone's body is only slightly more so. But I like it either way. :) Author's Response: Thank you, Claudia, for your criticism and your encouragement. I had not thought of that; I myself do not wear glasses, and I had thought that they would be rather conspicuous and rather more painful when digging into one's face. I will think on it. I would also like to express my appreciation for your username. I am a student of history, and a sometime student of Latin, and greatly enjoyed Robert Graves's take on such an oft-maligned character in Roman history. Pax, Aethyr |
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