Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 6 28 Jun 2010 11:01 pm
Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed) [Report This]
    What a magnificent chapter! Neither Snape nor Harry seemed out of character at all. Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I am glad you thought so! With regard to the updating, I am working on the next chapters of all my stories, and will post at more frequent intervals, now that school is no longer in session.

    Thanks for reviewing!

    Pax,

    Aethyr

Title: Chapter 3 28 Jun 2010 10:52 pm
Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm impressed! All of your characters are so well written and in character. Wonderful job!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad they managed to stay in character, even through the emotional bits!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jun 2010 10:45 pm
Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed) [Report This]
    "I was incapacitated, and then dead, shortly afterwards." I love, love, love that line! It's so Dumbledore!

    Great beginning! I can't wait to read the rest.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad I got his voice right! I've always thought that Dumbledore's voice was sometimes rather like Snape's in its wit, though without the sharp edges of Snape's abiding cynicism.

    Thank you for the review!

Title: Chapter 4 28 Jun 2010 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter. The sense of foreboding is very real. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that I was able to capture that particular looming shadow.
Title: Chapter 3 28 Jun 2010 10:20 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful, but so bittersweet! My heart goes out to Severus, what a cruel burden he had to bear. The final line is heart-breaking.
Title: Chapter 6 28 Jun 2010 8:44 pm
Reviewer: CamsMimi21501 (Signed) [Report This]
    This story, particularly this latest chapter (six) is what JKR should have given us throughout Deathly Hallows. Severus and Harry had one of the most fleshed out and defined relationships in the series and deserved better than her concentration on johnny-come-lately plotlines and cardboard characters being front and center. Thank you for this, I can't wait to see where you go with it.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you; I'm flattered that you think so highly of my work! I had some of the same criticisms when I read Deathly Hallows, and I reckon I may have been subconsciously compensating for them as I wrote this.

    Pax,

    Aethyr

Title: Chapter 6 28 Jun 2010 7:55 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww that was excellent, your best yet! I loved the last paragraph, there's lots of hope for our two boys yet!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have to keep improving then, eh? *knocks on wood*
Title: Chapter 5 28 Jun 2010 7:51 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Good job, Poor Severus. Dumby is very manipulitive, the old coot!
Title: Chapter 2 28 Jun 2010 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Harry and Severus are perfectly in character. But of course it would be hard for Harry to blindly take Severus' word. Perhaps he should have more 'faith', but many people would have a difficult time believing after 'seeing the murder with their own eyes', and Harry and Sev do have a long history of mistrust and misjudging one another, some of which is Sev's own fault.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Indeed, what with Harry's stubborn mistrust of authority figures, it would be difficult to accept anything on faith, especially any shattering of illusions with regard to Snape. I'm glad you found my portrayal of the two to be in character.

    Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 6 28 Jun 2010 6:15 pm
Reviewer: lilette (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think I've read other fics that deal with this particular potions from HBP and it makes TOTAL sense that Harry and Severus would see some sort of connection through it. Dumbledore was their mentor and the man who has been sort of in control of their lives for a while... This chapter has won my heart!!!

    Author's Response:

    I am very well pleased that you are enjoying it, and that it has had some resonance. I've always thought the two scenes (the cave and the tower scenes) to be uncannily parallel, especially reading them one right after the other.

    Thank you for reviewing!


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