| Title: The Morning After
| 14 Sep 2014 11:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the scene with the twins, thank you
That's good that Severus accepts the twins as Arielle's guardians, because he's going to need all the help he can get, LOL! I always liked the idea of Sev with a little girl.
Oh, I noticed a small typo down at the end of the chapter. "I do believe those TWO care about you a lot" is how that sentence should read, you have the wrong to in there. But otherwise a very sweet chapter!
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