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Title: Some Home Truths 31 Jul 2008 3:43 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the way you handled this chapter. harry's reaction to the news is believable and so is Severus's. I saw a comment that said they thought Sev was being OOC, I disagree. This takes place right after SS, so the animosity between Snape & Harry isn't great as it is later on in the series, and anyhow this is AU, so Severus won't necessarily act exactly the way he would in canon. I think it is perfectly logical to portray Severus as you do and like it immensely.
    The part with the secret marriage and Sev not hating James or Remus was excellent and a neat twist from other stories. I also like the fact that Dumbledore didn't know about the marriage, it shows Sev doesn't trust him quite as much as it seems, which is good. The old man meddles too much and manipulates people.

    I can't wait to see Harry's face when Sev gives him the potions kit, and that's different too, since most other writers always focus on Quidditch. Nice twist!

    perhaps Sev could also show Harry the picture of him and Lily, I think it would make Harry a good deal more receptive towards him.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your thoughtful reviews, I'm glad you are seeing a lot of the same things I do. I think you will like where the story takes these themes later on. I don't necessarily believe in CP - although my own child has had her butt beaten on the rare occasion. And each and every time, she was warned beforehand that if she continued the incorrect behavior, that would be the consequence. Of course, now she is taller than me - and that becomes a problem. But she is a good kid.

    Sev doesn't necessarily hate Remus - but he's not exactly his favorite person to be around, either. And Harry is melting Severus' heart - although Sev can muster up the sneer when he needs it! ;-)

     

    Cheers,

     

    Zara 

     

Title: Some Home Truths 31 Jul 2008 12:23 am
Reviewer: amarie10 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story, I especially like the way you're portraying Snape. Keep up the good work!
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Arashi (Signed) [Report This]
    Please update soon, I am enjoying this story.
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 9:29 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter. I'm especially enjoying the smooth, virtually error-free writing.
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 9:25 pm
Reviewer: Munchkin (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Amazing chapter! I absolutely love this story. I'm curious about the scales that Harry was eyeing, did Severus buy them? I'm also curious about how the potions lessons over the summer will go.
    Please update soon!
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 7:12 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    ahh that last paragraph was so sweet! i love it when snape does simple parental things like tucking harry in, with him wishing harry was his, too cute
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 6:44 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I like this story. I don't where it is going but I am glad that Severus and Harry are becoming a little family.

    Dumbledore had better not try to intervene
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 6:31 pm
Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update.
    Keep writing!
    ;-)

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