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Reviews For Vows
The part with the secret marriage and Sev not hating James or Remus was excellent and a neat twist from other stories. I also like the fact that Dumbledore didn't know about the marriage, it shows Sev doesn't trust him quite as much as it seems, which is good. The old man meddles too much and manipulates people. I can't wait to see Harry's face when Sev gives him the potions kit, and that's different too, since most other writers always focus on Quidditch. Nice twist! perhaps Sev could also show Harry the picture of him and Lily, I think it would make Harry a good deal more receptive towards him. Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughtful reviews, I'm glad you are seeing a lot of the same things I do. I think you will like where the story takes these themes later on. I don't necessarily believe in CP - although my own child has had her butt beaten on the rare occasion. And each and every time, she was warned beforehand that if she continued the incorrect behavior, that would be the consequence. Of course, now she is taller than me - and that becomes a problem. But she is a good kid. Sev doesn't necessarily hate Remus - but he's not exactly his favorite person to be around, either. And Harry is melting Severus' heart - although Sev can muster up the sneer when he needs it! ;-)
Cheers,
Zara
Please update soon!
Dumbledore had better not try to intervene
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