Beautiful chapter. Thank you.
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| 23 Mar 2011 5:16 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I really loved the poem. I may take a leaf out of your book and do a journal like you have Harry and Draco doing. It sounds very therapeutic.
I love how the occlumency worked, with Harry having a forest and the Snake as his guardian. I liked how the geyser holes acted as barriers for thoughts. That is really creative. Great job!
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| 06 Sep 2008 4:39 am
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter! I would love to know more about this poet and hear the song preformed. Please send them to me. email is lionessmon @ gmail . com
Aww, that was a real breakthrough for Harry, letting Severus comfort him that way. The poem was wonderful, it was very moving, and it fits both boys very well. I'm happy to see them finally becoming brothers and the last part with Harry's mind techniques was very interesting. I know it will be hard for him to face the Dursleys, but once he has done so, perhaps he can get some kind of closure. Update soon!
The poem was awesome and so was the chapter. I really liked how you showed Harry trusting his father enough to talk to him about Vernon and to cry on his shoulder. Can't wait to see the Dursleys get theirs. I always thought they got away with child abuse in the books.
I really liked this chapter, especially the part where Harry finally lets out some emotion. Also, could you please send me the poem? It seems very powerful.
loved the chapter, im looking forward to the court hearing too! i cant wait to see the dursleys go down :)
Aw, he really loves his son now. Poor Harry to have to go through this ordeal.
Very sweet interaction between Harry and Snape!
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