I like that Severus was there when Dobby visited Harry in the infirmary. The story unfolds so differently with someone looking out for Harry.
Well, I knew it wouldn't be long before Harry got himself into hot water, it never is. Kid's a trouble magnet! But Sev did warn him and he was fair and hopefully Harry will remember and not do something so stupid again. I actually felt just as bad for Sev as for Harry when he spanked him, since it's hard for a parent to punish a child that way, even if it's deserved. No wonder he needed a drink afterwards.
I hope they find the diary soon.
Title: Consequences I
| 12 Sep 2008 6:51 pm
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Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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Well written, yet enough changes to keep the interest up. Thanks for the hard work.
naughty harry! he was warned and did it anyway, tut tut lol i do love a defiant harry though even if it is unintentional! : )
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