I like your version of the dueling club incident, though Draco’s judgement left a lot to be desired.
| Title: Consequences II
| 23 Mar 2011 3:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous)
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I love that you kept the dueling scene the same as it was in the HP movies, but you came us some behind the scene stuff to go along with your version of thing. I like how in this version, Draco's intentions were not sinister or anything, he just didn't think about what the repercussions of speaking Parseltoungue would be for his brother. So, in answer to your question at the end of this chapter, I think that maybe his punishment would have something to do with listening and following directions? Detentions? Grounded? lol, I have no clue!I think Draco will get to apologize, it seems like Harry is really sweet, and even though Ron was being really rude to him, he still went over to him to comfort him. So maybe he'll do the same with Draco?
i hope Draco appologizes there friendship is too important right now
Loved the twist on the dueling club, lockhart's such an ass! I liked how you had Sev make Nott pay for Ron's wand, maybe that will help him change his attitude towards Harry now. And Draco really surprised me, I wonder what kind of punishment Severus will give him? Maybe a spanking?
Author's Response: Ah, maybe... maybe not. Whatever it is you can be sure it's appropriate.
ooh naughty draco! good chapter, i like how ron's wand was broken and that nott has to pay for it : )
| Title: Consequences II
| 17 Sep 2008 9:08 am
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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very creative as usual, thanks
Hmm. Are you sure Draco isn't a Gryffindor? He was so impulsive and didn't think things through! I loved the chapter. I like that Sev carried through with the punishment and then cuddled him.
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