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Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 24 May 2022 12:53 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I really appreciated how Severus showed Draco the true impact of his actions on Harry at the dueling club. Very nicely done.
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 23 Mar 2011 3:54 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The use of the pensieve was surprising! But, that is what Draco needed, and Ron could do with a stroll down memory lane too!
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 03 Jan 2011 10:06 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    that was a smart way to show draco glad of it
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 21 Sep 2008 5:20 am
Reviewer: murgy31 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it!
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 20 Sep 2008 4:14 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, just never catches a break--does he? I think that the way you had Snape handle Draco was perfect--the grass is always greener on the other side, isn't it? Draco needed a harsh lesson to enable him to understand the seriousness of his actions.

    Please update soon-I'm really enjoying your story. I must admit also that although I really don't like CP in stories; you have not abused it -- you have kept the punishment only for the most serious offence, and he only used his hand. I do find 15 swats alot though-- but I have seen alot worse in stories; and yours is so well written that I don't mind it so much. I would prefer you find others ways to punish them though.

    Please update soon; I'm anxious to see the continuing developement of the relationship between them.

    Oh, and one last wish--I really hope that Severus can pry Draco from Lucius' claws and get custody of him.

    Ok, so this is really a long-winded review; but I'm excited about your story. Please update soon!
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 20 Sep 2008 8:10 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter. Keep it up.
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 20 Sep 2008 6:31 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter here! I think Draco will finally understand why Harry is the way he is, and how much it means to him to have a normal family and people who care about him. That beginning scene with petunia was heart-wrenching . . .I wanted to hug Harry and put HER face on the stove and see how she liked it! Wicked wicked woman!

    And the detentions will drive home Severus's point further to Draco that Harry doesn't need any more grief added to what he has to bear already.

    yay, we both updated! :)

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, it hurt to write that scene - but Draco needed to see it. Hearing about it is one thing, as he states at the end - but actually seeing the events from Harry's POV drives it home.

     

    I've been loving yours, BTW - Things have been crazy so I have only had a chance to read this week - but the chapters are quite awesome! Your cliffy has me wondering if Sev is going to save the day, and the Pegasus. I'll have to check now and see if you've resolved that!


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