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Reviews For Vows
Please update soon-I'm really enjoying your story. I must admit also that although I really don't like CP in stories; you have not abused it -- you have kept the punishment only for the most serious offence, and he only used his hand. I do find 15 swats alot though-- but I have seen alot worse in stories; and yours is so well written that I don't mind it so much. I would prefer you find others ways to punish them though. Please update soon; I'm anxious to see the continuing developement of the relationship between them. Oh, and one last wish--I really hope that Severus can pry Draco from Lucius' claws and get custody of him. Ok, so this is really a long-winded review; but I'm excited about your story. Please update soon!
And the detentions will drive home Severus's point further to Draco that Harry doesn't need any more grief added to what he has to bear already. yay, we both updated! :) Author's Response: Yeah, it hurt to write that scene - but Draco needed to see it. Hearing about it is one thing, as he states at the end - but actually seeing the events from Harry's POV drives it home.
I've been loving yours, BTW - Things have been crazy so I have only had a chance to read this week - but the chapters are quite awesome! Your cliffy has me wondering if Sev is going to save the day, and the Pegasus. I'll have to check now and see if you've resolved that! |
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