So good to read this again.
Thanks for the great read. I hope that Harry’s summer is glorious indeed.
I really enjoyed the story. I thought your characterizations were done really well and the plot was good too. I loved Draco's inclusion in the family. That was a really nice touch.
But honestly the best thing about this fic was that it did NOT rehash canon! I loved how canon events inspired the plot of your story but you still maintained a good level of creativity. Very nice job there. Off to read the sequel!
I'm a bit ashamed & guilty to admit that i only reviewed after i read til the 4th series. I just wanted you to know that you are a really talented writer. I was really glad that i got to read such excellent stories. You know, i think the challenge for HP fanfiction writers who manage their stories within the seven time frames of the series is writing it without seemingly redundant. And you have done a very great job so far for providing more creative story lines. I really love that you wrote the story in a very neat plot. I love how you developed Snape character here & i think all the readers agree that he is an ideal vision for a father. I just love how he loves Harry and Draco. I dare say that you are or were a psychology student, no? Since you had a very perfect way to describe Harry's predicament with the Dursley, where you really emphasized the psychological effect for the victim. Sorry for the long babble, i just really love this story & i'm currently rereading it again from the first series, which i rarely do unless i consider the story really exceptional. I'm really sure that you will be a great writer & i'm wishing all the success for your endeavor. Oh and don't worry, i'll put reviews in every series later ;)
Cheers!
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| 26 May 2011 9:25 pm
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| Reviewer: ladysmathers (Anonymous)
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Wonderful story! I absolutely loved it! Thank you.
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| 24 Mar 2011 6:26 am
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*applauds* Simply awesome! This was a great read.
Everything seemed to turn out really good for everyone, except maybe Lockhart haha, but he was a prat anyway *shrugs*
You are a great writer with great vocabulary and impressive in the difficult task of telling a well thought out story.
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| 11 Feb 2011 7:09 am
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Thanks for a wonderful story - I can't wait to start reading the sequels. I LOVED the VOWS poem - thanks for sharing it!
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| 10 Feb 2011 11:04 am
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| Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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Truly a good read, full of fun and adventure if you discount he horrible pain of Harry's life before Snape took him in.
Incredibly enjoyable AU that I honestly wasn't expecting when I started reading. This story is well thought out, reasonably lengthed and a great study of the characters. The changes that you've made to said characters work very well because of the plot -something I don't see too often.
I'm hoping to see more 'books' in this universe, and quite pleased to archive this fic as one of my favourite CoS Potter stories!
Author's Response: Then you'll be glad to note that the other two - Duty and Honour are also currently posted as well. Duty is finished and Honour is now at Chapter 20 and winding down. Whether I continue - don't know yet, but I thank you for your insightful reviews. The only reason Severus is resigned to letting Harry go is because he knew Harry was the only one who could get through. Not much he could do about that - and Severus is a pragmatist. var fctb_tool=null; function FCTB_Init_3eab4bf9242d40ff8d06c20d3396440d(t) { fctb_tool=t; start(fctb_tool); } FCTB_Init_3eab4bf9242d40ff8d06c20d3396440d(document['FCTB_Init_2e00350507a247b091b73ba723342cbc']); delete document['FCTB_Init_2e00350507a247b091b73ba723342cbc']
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