| Title: Friends and Colleagues, Lend Me Your Ear
| 16 May 2022 3:48 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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So nice that Snape has revealed the truth to McGonagall and Pomfrey.
Severus seemed to take the news in stride. I like how he’s compiling evidence and planning properly before he takes action against the Dursley’s. I wonder how Harry will react to all this.
Very nice chapter. I’m so glad that Snape told Harry about his history with Lily.
It’s always a relief to see Harry properly kitted out after a shopping expedition. I enjoyed the exchange between Lucius and Snape.
Great chapter. I like how Snape is taking his guardianship seriously. All the small details you’ve included make the story rich and engaging.
Great start to the story. I’m looking forward to seeing the Dursley’s get their due.
I really enjoyed the story. I thought your characterizations were done really well and the plot was good too. I loved Draco's inclusion in the family. That was a really nice touch.
But honestly the best thing about this fic was that it did NOT rehash canon! I loved how canon events inspired the plot of your story but you still maintained a good level of creativity. Very nice job there. Off to read the sequel!
I'm a bit ashamed & guilty to admit that i only reviewed after i read til the 4th series. I just wanted you to know that you are a really talented writer. I was really glad that i got to read such excellent stories. You know, i think the challenge for HP fanfiction writers who manage their stories within the seven time frames of the series is writing it without seemingly redundant. And you have done a very great job so far for providing more creative story lines. I really love that you wrote the story in a very neat plot. I love how you developed Snape character here & i think all the readers agree that he is an ideal vision for a father. I just love how he loves Harry and Draco. I dare say that you are or were a psychology student, no? Since you had a very perfect way to describe Harry's predicament with the Dursley, where you really emphasized the psychological effect for the victim. Sorry for the long babble, i just really love this story & i'm currently rereading it again from the first series, which i rarely do unless i consider the story really exceptional. I'm really sure that you will be a great writer & i'm wishing all the success for your endeavor. Oh and don't worry, i'll put reviews in every series later ;)
Cheers!
| Title: Some Home Truths
| 19 Nov 2012 10:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Jillian (Anonymous)
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I love this story so far, i've only just found this series and iam so looking forward to read the whole series :)
i kinda wnat snape to be harry's real father :3 but that's just me, i love snape/harry stories :)
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