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Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Arashi (Signed) [Report This]
    Please update soon, I am enjoying this story.
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 9:29 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter. I'm especially enjoying the smooth, virtually error-free writing.
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 9:25 pm
Reviewer: Munchkin (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Amazing chapter! I absolutely love this story. I'm curious about the scales that Harry was eyeing, did Severus buy them? I'm also curious about how the potions lessons over the summer will go.
    Please update soon!
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 7:12 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    ahh that last paragraph was so sweet! i love it when snape does simple parental things like tucking harry in, with him wishing harry was his, too cute
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 6:44 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I like this story. I don't where it is going but I am glad that Severus and Harry are becoming a little family.

    Dumbledore had better not try to intervene
Title: Some Home Truths 30 Jul 2008 6:31 pm
Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update.
    Keep writing!
    ;-)
Title: Revelations 29 Jul 2008 2:36 am
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    A wonderful new story! I greatly enjoyed readind the chapters and hope to read more of them soon)
Title: Revelations 28 Jul 2008 8:24 pm
Reviewer: Cherlindrea34 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love this story, I do hope you update soon!
Title: A New Day 28 Jul 2008 6:03 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked several things about this chapter. This little exchange "“Wish I knew how he manages that little trick…” he murmured as Pomfrey came to stand beside him, and pushed him back on the pillows.

    “Don’t we all!” she said sotto-voce." showed nicely that Harry is already becoming more comfortable with Severus. I also liked how he realized that Severus had been helping him all year with a nutritive potion. And I like that Severus will already know that Harry is a parselmouth. (I must admit that I also really like the fact that you use "parselmouth" and "parseltongue" correctly.) It will be interesting to see how this changes Harry's second year.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I truly like that bit as well. For everyone who is wondering... Parselmouth is what you are, ie: someone who speaks parseltongue - the language.

    Thanks!

    Zarathustra 

     

     

Title: Revelations 28 Jul 2008 3:30 pm
Reviewer: cait- (writeurlife) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    really good. update soon!

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