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Title: Revelations 27 Jul 2008 10:41 pm
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I came across your story on fanfiction and then again here. I really like your idea of Severus becoming Harry's guardian before the second year. I noticed the warnings that you have here on this site that includes rape. I am not a fan of stories that include rape and you did not include that on the fanfiction site. Do you still intend on including that in this story? I just wanted to know before I become too invested in the story as I really have enjoyed the first three chapters very much. Thanks.

    Author's Response:

    For those who are wondering, the rape is alluded to - never actually shown. Harry never verbalizes about it in front of the reader as he is initially incapable of doing so due to his inability to acknowledge it. It was supposed to be a secret. It does, however, color his emotional baggage and he and Severus have to work through it together. Does he get to face the raper? Oh, yes. And that's all I'll tell you.

Title: Revelations 27 Jul 2008 5:57 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    This was wonderful Sev is being a caring guardian going over all of Harry's stuff and buying more than he needs in clothes and school books, maybe he could get some other books of interest to Harry. Sev is taking his guardianship of Harry very seriously and I for one love it. Just one criticism the day that Vernon had his dinner was supposed to be Harry’s birthday (in the book) so in reality he should not have missed it but since this is your fiction I guess it would be ok if the dinner was a day or two before.

    Author's Response: Yeah, I know - I delayed it by about 24 hours. I'm messing with canon anyways - what's a measly 24 hours among friends... Besides, it was nice and dramatic. *snicker*
Title: Revelations 27 Jul 2008 2:17 am
Reviewer: GoLd (Signed) [Report This]
    Just finished it! Loved it but did he have to miss his birthday? Couldn't have been that day?
Title: Revelations 27 Jul 2008 1:13 am
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    loved the chapter!!!! I really, really, really, reall, don't like Lucius Malfoy!!!

    Author's Response: Neither do I, especially in this AU. He's truly a beast as we shall find out later.
Title: Revelations 27 Jul 2008 1:13 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    ahh poor harry missing his birthday! hopefully snape will make it up to him
Title: A New Day 25 Jul 2008 2:19 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice story. Snape's too nice to be in character, but it makes it much more enjoyable to read!
Title: A New Day 25 Jul 2008 2:03 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter and an intriguing new story! i really like the idea of snape taking over after the 2nd year, and your backstory for the 1st year. please continue, i would like to read more!
Title: A New Day 24 Jul 2008 10:22 pm
Reviewer: Munchkin (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story. The fact that the corporal punishment was talked about first was a very good idea. I seem to be reading more and more stories with that in them, but the punishment is never talked about be that happens. Harry seems to have his Slytherin side out when he deduced the fact that someone was spiking his pumpkin juice all year. Anyway, please update! It's nice to read a story with proper grammar and spelling as usually when I read stories, I end up correcting everything in my head!
Title: A New Day 24 Jul 2008 2:03 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this one and looking forward to more.
Title: A New Day 24 Jul 2008 1:55 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    cool chappter, i loved snapes comment about his hand meeting with harry's bare behind, its so snape lol

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