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Title: Trial: Part 2 23 Mar 2011 6:29 am
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow...what a chapter. You right with incredible detail, but some how, you manage not to over do it. I was thoroughly absorbed in this chapter. The trial! Vernon was completely vicious! Ick!
    I did want to point out one thing kind of...
    erm, Petunia was given the punishment of 11 long years in azckaban. 11 long years of reliving the worse moments of her life every single day over and over again, which include (but is not limited to) her sister leaving home to go to Hogwarts, leaving her a lonely Muggle and her sister dying. And, as soon as the 11 years are up, and she can finally be somewhat happy again, she get's the worse punishment possible (supposedly), which is the dementor's kiss.
    But, vicious awful Vernon immediately gets death? It may be because i'm all super con-capital punishment and stuff, but I think that is truly the easy way out. I think he should have gone to Azckaban too, to really get his punishment in before he died. But like I said, I am extremely con-death penalty, even in the case of my own little ghost that haunt me, so that may be why I feel like Vernon shouldn't have been kissed, then killed. It just seemed to easy for him.
    I'm really glad you made it so Dudley got off. I just hope St. Brutus' doesn't make him even tougher and gang bang-ish.
    I analyze stories wayyyy too much...sorry. But at least you get to read and be entertained by my unnecessarily long reviews!
Title: Vows 23 Mar 2011 5:16 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really loved the poem. I may take a leaf out of your book and do a journal like you have Harry and Draco doing. It sounds very therapeutic.
    I love how the occlumency worked, with Harry having a forest and the Snake as his guardian. I liked how the geyser holes acted as barriers for thoughts. That is really creative. Great job!
Title: Let the Games Begin 22 Mar 2011 2:11 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oi, I just got the treated sheets thing...*blushes* lol, how mean...*sigh* boys...
Title: Let the Games Begin 22 Mar 2011 2:06 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Err, why did Seamus poor Ammonia on Harry's bed? : (
    That was mean...
    Once again, a very well written chapter.
Title: Dropping In 22 Mar 2011 1:31 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You did indeed warn us... : p
    Very...well written...poor Harry. Poor Draco...Dursley...oi...Dursley.
    I love the Muggle pen lol...I read another fan fic where Harry transformed his quill into a Muggle pen to help him write better. I am now decided that if I ever went to Hogwarts, I would bring tons of spiral notebooks and packs and packs of Muggle pens! What is this parchment and quill nonsense!? lol
Title: Paradigm Shifts 22 Mar 2011 12:54 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great writing. I liked Snape being protective of Harry. I was a little disapointed at the way Dumbledore appears in the story... Dumbledore is extremely intelligent and knowledgeable and kind, I don't think he'd have let Harry stay in that abusive of a condition. Especially if Minerva or Poppy had anything to do with it----or even Snape for that matter. Dumbledore trusted Snape a lot, so it would make sense for him to go along with the "Harry is abused and neglected" thing. In addition to that, Dumbledore knew that Snape was abused (and his mum) when he was younger, so surely he wouldn't have ignored Snape, no matter what the greater good would have turned out.
    Other than that, I really like this story. I just wanted to peek at it and see what it was about, and now i'm on chapter 7! Oops! I'm really nervous now about Harry's changing appearance. Does he look completely different? Or are the glamours he had not so bad? The way the kids will react once school begins....oi! Or Ron!
Title: Term Ends 11 Feb 2011 7:09 am
Reviewer: Shhhh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for a wonderful story - I can't wait to start reading the sequels. I LOVED the VOWS poem - thanks for sharing it!
Title: Term Ends 10 Feb 2011 11:04 am
Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Truly a good read, full of fun and adventure if you discount he horrible pain of Harry's life before Snape took him in.
Title: Button, Button, Who has the Button? 17 Jan 2011 4:13 am
Reviewer: mikaye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is a great chapter. it is good ginny was smart enough to through away the diary.
Title: Term Ends 08 Jan 2011 11:45 pm
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    Incredibly enjoyable AU that I honestly wasn't expecting when I started reading. This story is well thought out, reasonably lengthed and a great study of the characters. The changes that you've made to said characters work very well because of the plot -something I don't see too often.

    I'm hoping to see more 'books' in this universe, and quite pleased to archive this fic as one of my favourite CoS Potter stories!

    Author's Response: Then you'll be glad to note that the other two - Duty and Honour are also currently posted as well. Duty is finished and Honour is now at Chapter 20 and winding down. Whether I continue - don't know yet, but I thank you for your insightful reviews. The only reason Severus is resigned to letting Harry go is because he knew Harry was the only one who could get through. Not much he could do about that - and Severus is a pragmatist. var fctb_tool=null; function FCTB_Init_3eab4bf9242d40ff8d06c20d3396440d(t) { fctb_tool=t; start(fctb_tool); } FCTB_Init_3eab4bf9242d40ff8d06c20d3396440d(document['FCTB_Init_2e00350507a247b091b73ba723342cbc']); delete document['FCTB_Init_2e00350507a247b091b73ba723342cbc']

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