A brilliant rewrite of your AU of the CoS climax! I'm impressed with how you implemented the same events happening - but quite a few of them for different reasons.
And once more, I love your version of Harry. I love how he's not completely clueless - thanks to Snape - and able to use this knowledge to get things accomplished far easier.
The only thing that seemed a tad OOC was Snape being perfectly fine with letting his son go face down Tom Riddle and a Basilisk...with the chance that his other son may well be dead too. That's honestly it, though. I'm impressed!
Really enjoying the trial chapter more than expected.
And oh no! Malfoy just heard about what Dobby did. Hope that doesn't end up causing even more problems for the poor house elf...
Honestly, how have I not reviewed yet? Guess I just raced through this wonderful story!
I'm absolutely in love with the manner in which this fic is progressing - I love the character development and the subtle (and not so subtle) differences from a traditional Severitus fic. I think that the way this is written and the manner in which this is progressing is at perfect pace.
And then I looked up at the list of future chapters and realized I'm only about 1/3 done with this gem! Honestly, CoS is one of my favourites of the series and I cannot wait to see how this moves forward.
/some childish part of me is hoping Harry gets a snake familiar of his own, but then again that's something I'm always wishing for/
Looks like Harry will have tough times ahead.
wow loved this and the cat awwww
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| Title: Dirty Socks and Books
| 03 Jan 2011 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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dahm just seee lucias surronded reminded me just how dahm powerful this family is.
Lockhart got what he deserved you do not ever mess with the Snape's
i loved Severus's faith in Harry i think that meant alot and Fawkes he defintly has something for the young boy
love Ron in this love it and Draco afraid of Snakes and he is slytherin well sort of i think he and harry have a lot of the other houses in them
| Title: A Visit from Father Christmas
| 03 Jan 2011 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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awwww i loved the gifts and draco offically a Snape that is huge the adoption brought tears to my eyes as did the end where they opened up to each other
loved the Bishop it was needed
| Title: Button, Button, Who has the Button?
| 03 Jan 2011 10:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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awwwww first off glad on the cooperation of making sure Ginny is ok and the tree so fitting
| Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane
| 03 Jan 2011 10:06 pm
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that was a smart way to show draco glad of it
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