Very cool ending. I loved Draco's familiar Onyx, so sweet, and I hope draco could become friends with all Harry's friends so he won't feel like a third wheel. It looks like they're going to be fine and have a happy home life at last. You should write a sequel about the summer. Awesome story!
cool chapter, im glad everyone came out relativly unscathed!
Title: Dirty Socks and Books
| 16 Nov 2008 9:56 am
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Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Looking forward to more!
I'm pleased that you have updated, but sad to see that the story is finishing soon. Hopefully, you will write a sequel?
Great job with Lockhart, who was just so typically funny and Sybill too who was clueless. And Lucius was just plain aggravating as usual, but I'm happy Harry tricked him into freeing Dobby. Looking forward to the end of the year!
Check out Shadows to see the latest chapter. It starts getting darker from there on, FYI.
yes, that was great! I loved how Sev made Gilderoy come down there and help or try to. The part about the miner and the bird was great, I've read about people doing that in the gold mines in California with canaries.
So the stone snakes called Harry the Heir, is he the Heir of Slytherin in your story? I also like how it was draco and Trelwney that were rescued instead of Ginny. Great job! I wonder what Severus will say to Draco?
By the way I've posted a new chapter of WSG, and wondered if you'd review it and let me know if your wall-oainting experience with your daughter was anything like Harry's.
well done harry for defeating and killing gertrude, snapes spell was great, sev will be happy that his two boys are safe and well
is severus going to show us his protective side now? both of his sons came half an inch from dying today!
Title: The Chamber
| 04 Nov 2008 2:59 pm
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Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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Draco seems embarassed, I guess being kidnapped by Trelawney would do that... Update soon please
Action packed! I was a bit suprised that Severus let Harry go on without him without a fight but I guess he trusted him not to kill himself lol : )
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