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Reviews For Bitter Sweet Revenge
PLEASE continue!:) A little bit of advice:Maybe you could slow the story down a bit / I'm having trouble keeping up. But I still absoulutly adore this story! Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hope that made sense. the story is different in its own right as severus has a total personality change but i like where the story is heading. hope to see a new chapter soon kate Author's Response: i am sorry i confused you , yes they were forceful with harry , but Severus had not cause Harry to have a panic attack all the other times that he had force harry to do something , that is the reason why Eithen blew up at Severus for causing harry's panic attack
Author's Response: very glad you think so
Author's Response: thanks, I just have to finish typing chp. 3 then i can post it
Is Harry ever going to come around and see Snape as more than the bad guy. I am pleased with your interaction between Him and Draco. He could really use a good friend. Author's Response: thank you for your review , i glad that you like the story chp.3 will be out soon hopefully
Author's Response: thank you for the grammer corrections , i am glad you like the story
Author's Response: thank you for the ideas, chp. 2 is so long because i had no idea where cut it off. chp. 3 will be a lot shorter hopefully if i don't get carried away again. |
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