Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Harry's First Detention 12 Dec 2010 11:51 pm
Reviewer: MadameAlian (Signed) [Report This]
    ".....he was clothed in nothing but the hospital gown and it, like most of its species, didn’t close in the back. He squawked and tried to grab at the edges of the gown, but Snape swatted his hands away, forcing him to continue to moon the Headmaster, his Head of House, and the school’s medi-witch."
    Even though that this was quite serious, I laughed.
Title: Harry's First Detention 10 Dec 2010 5:30 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    That was really good! Poor Harry :(
Title: Harry's First Detention 06 Jul 2010 6:17 pm
Reviewer: Noblesse Oblige (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked it, really! You should keep writing 'cause I think you have a real gift for entertaining people. Huzzah!
Title: Harry's First Detention 17 Feb 2010 4:38 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant start! I'm off to read the sequel...
Title: Harry's First Detention 22 Nov 2009 8:12 pm
Reviewer: helga1967 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh! Well write and excellent plot. I love the contrast of meaning that Harry and Snape have in all the tale.
Title: Harry's First Detention 22 Nov 2009 9:25 am
Reviewer: Halfblood (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was amazing.
    Poor, poor Harry.
    Loved this line: Good grief. At this rate they’d have to hope that Voldemort walked up to Potter and tapped him on the shoulder.

    I'm off to read your sequel now :)
Title: Harry's First Detention 25 Oct 2009 2:15 pm
Reviewer: Noel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was completely absorbed into your Potter world!!
    You are truely talented.
Title: Harry's First Detention 21 Jul 2009 9:42 pm
Reviewer: SIRIUSBLACK (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow...
    that is quite a story...
Title: Harry's First Detention 23 Jan 2009 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Rhiannan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    VERY nice! I really think that you should turn this into a longer fic - I'm gonna read the sequel, but I just know it won't be enough! One thing - I don't think you should have Severus do quite that much damage - it's really disturbing that he could loose control to that extent.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks - I'm glad that you liked it and I hope you do enjoy the sequel! :)

    In terms of how much damage Snape does - I think the point is that he DID lose control and that's why Harry got hurt. It was a single slap, but he forgot their difference in size because he was so fixated on Harry as James - i.e. a contemporary of his own - and he lashed out accordingly. It was only when he connected that he was incontrovertibly shown that this was not his old nemesis but a child. And, to be fair to him, Harry wouldn't have been so hurt if he hadn't been so close to the wall. Not an excuse for Snape's behavior by any means, but he genuinely didn't mean to harm Harry to that degree... but that  is unfortunately what often happens when you lose control. :(

Title: Harry's First Detention 13 Jan 2009 11:52 am
Reviewer: Shoonasasi (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was beautiful, so poignant.

    "All courage and nobility but the brains of a trout" - Hee hee, I liked that =)

    Author's Response: Thank you!! :)

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