Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Harry's First Detention 11 Jan 2009 7:32 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol. I love it. VEry well done

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Harry's First Detention 12 Dec 2008 6:38 pm
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love this story am glad that Severus shut up long enough to hear Harry out. I am glad that Harry will have a good home.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I know what you mean about shutting up and listening! Esp when dealing with traumatized children that can be the biggest challenge. :) Very glad you enjoyed the story; thanks for taking the time to let me know.
Title: Harry's First Detention 18 Sep 2008 7:13 pm
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! So much information in such a small space, you are very talented.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!!
Title: Harry's First Detention 14 Aug 2008 8:38 pm
Reviewer: Aiwendil (Signed) [Report This]
    That was wonderful! You got Harry's uncertainty down very well and the slow development of Snape's anger and following confusion because of Harry's movements.
    Thanks a lot for this and keep writing,
    ai

    Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the sequel as well. :)
Title: Harry's First Detention 06 Aug 2008 8:14 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    oh why didn't you carry on this would of made a brilliant long fan fiction, your writing style is brilliant

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words. I hope you have found the sequel and are finding it to your liking as well! :)
Title: Harry's First Detention 06 Aug 2008 4:58 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is awesome!

    I hate that poor Harry was abused so horribly, but Snape's thoughts and actions were so funny that it made up for it. Amazing work, I enjoyed reading this very much! I only wish there was more.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed the blend of pathos and humor. :)
Title: Harry's First Detention 05 Aug 2008 5:45 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    While the story was enjoyable, your deptiction of Albus as a powerful wizard made this a stand out.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! I think that sometimes it's easy to forget that Albus really does wield that kind of power - glad you enjoyed how I handled it. :)
Title: Harry's First Detention 04 Aug 2008 8:09 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Really enjoyed this! Well done!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your taking the time to review!
Title: Harry's First Detention 04 Aug 2008 4:35 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this story, and have in fact gone and found you on fanfiction.net to see if you've written anything else. So now I'm heading off to read the sequel XD

    What I liked about this was the way you described Snape, showing him as protective, and genuinely repulsed that he hit a child, no matter who they are/what he feels for them. Great job, and I hope you keep posting here :D

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate your specific feedback. To me, in this AU at least, Snape is mean and snarky but fundamentally decent, and that's what I was trying to bring out in the scene. I appreciate your letting me know you enjoyed it.
Title: Harry's First Detention 04 Aug 2008 1:26 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really intersting one-shot. Nicely written.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it!

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