I really liked the story so far, but I'm going to stop here.
I can't stand reading child abuse that isn't seen as abuse in the story.
From the other comments I figure washing a childs mouth with soap is normal in some country, probably the US, but it really isn't in others and seems inhumane to people from these countries. I study social work and we are taught that something like this is a big no-go, not to mention totally ineffective as a corrective measure.
So, yeah. You write well, but maybe read up on the UN convention of the rights of the child?
It was really awesome! I like this story so much and i don't know what to do now. I want to read more and more.. but it's already finish. Thank you very much for this magnificent story!!
i love all of yoru stories. I love yoru writing. I would LOVE to see a sequel to this one.
| Title: Catspaw
| 06 Apr 2015 9:53 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I am living this story - but The start of this chapter really threw me off - because Ron and Harry both curse and it seems horribly out of character for them to say 'Christ', 'Mary' and even 'damn'... They are 11, and not muggles... It just pulled me out of the story (enough so to pause and share it with you).
But I LOVE this storyline and Snape!!!
| Title: Tying Up Loose Ends
| 26 Sep 2014 6:26 am
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| Reviewer: Arwen_Evenstar (Anonymous)
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Hello! I loved this story until the school year ended. It was a perfect combination of AU and cannon. After this it just got too different. I know this is a fanfic, and it's your story, but all the made up creatures and snape's closeness to them isn't my taste. It just got to be too much. I have noticed this is a lot of your fics, some more then others. For example, the made up creatures and their importance in Seasons of Warmth I could handle. It's just my opinion. You certainly are very creative. I also love how you describe all the food. Even the little thinks like clothing brands and book names you put a lot of thought into. You are a very talented writer. You are like a fanfic legioned to me! How you managed to write like 42 stories is beyond me. Keep it up girl! :D
| Title: Tying Up Loose Ends
| 27 Apr 2013 10:42 am
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| Reviewer: P smith (Anonymous)
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I love your stories but I ALMOST wish you would leave off describing the food! I read your stories and get hungry despite the fact that I just ate.
Author's Response: You're not the first one who's told me that, LOL! If you ever want a recipe, let me know, since half the stuff I describe in here is real!
This was such a beautiful story, I read on one of the replies that you're considering a sequel.Does that still hold true or are you done with this? (Personal opinion: I'm really hoping you'll follow through with the nest segment because I love this story and the world you created)
Great story. It took me through every feeling known to humans. Very well done
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. Eventually, I plan to write a sequel so keep your eyes open. Hopefully I will have more time to write over the holiday break.
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