| Title: Keeping Up Appearances
| 07 Aug 2008 5:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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I know that Sev will continue to be an angel for Harry while at Hogwarts. Maybe he could set up something so Madam Pomphrey could give Harry a check up or he could do it himself so they could discover things like him wearing the wrong glasses etc. Would like to see Sev "anonymously" sending Harry decent clothes to wear (for outside school hours) as all Harry would have is his school clothes (Hagrid did not let him buy anything that was not on the school list). I am glad that Harry told Sev about discovering his identity because now they could develop a really great relationship.
Author's Response: Yes, Severus will eventually discover that Harry needs better glasses and he could also send him clothes as well. Their relationship will continue to grow secretly, of course, during the course of the year.
| Title: Keeping Up Appearances
| 07 Aug 2008 6:47 am
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| Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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you are really making this premise work. i've seen this premise in a few other stories but this is uncommonly well thought out & well done. looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I should have the next chapter up by tomorrow night.
| Title: Keeping Up Appearances
| 07 Aug 2008 3:48 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Lovely chapter! I really like how you've portrayed the relationship between Harry and Severus here. It's great! Hurry up and write more! Please?
Author's Response: Okay, I'm writing as fast as I can here! :)
| Title: Keeping Up Appearances
| 07 Aug 2008 3:25 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Wow! That was some lesson. I like the way you had Harry know the right answers, it makes sense that Snape would teach him potions while he was sick. And the conversation after and Severus's reassurances were perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted Harry to at least have a basic knowledge of potions here.
| Title: Keeping Up Appearances
| 07 Aug 2008 3:22 am
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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Aww, I love this! Such a brilliant chapter. I love the way you intertwine the POV's it make sit so much more interesting to read that way. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you'll like the rest of it. I like representing two different viewpoints, it gives me a greater scope to work with.
good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wonderful, just wonderful!
Author's Response: Glad you like my newest one! I just updated Where Shadows Go, by the way.
| Title: Keeping Up Appearances
| 06 Aug 2008 8:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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I like it even more now, lol. I forgot to say that I LOVE In The Arms Of The Angel and I think It's cool that that song inspired you to write this. Brilliant job Snapegirl!
Author's Response: It was funny, I was looking at the challenges and reading the Magic Potions One when the commercial about the abused animals came on, where Sarah McLaughlin ask people to donate to the Humane Society and that song was playing, and suddenly I had this . . .vision of Snape holding a sick Harry in his arms, and after that "Arms of a Dark Angel" was born. I also put on the CD with that song on it so I could write while listening to it. It was very inspiring and I love Sarah's songs.
that was great, well done harry for his potions knowledge, credit to severus as well for teaching him when he was ill. great explaination from severus about his behaviour towards harry and that he doesn't mean any of it, i hope harry and severus have many great evenings together
Author's Response: They will, though there are bound to be some disagreements as well, since Harry's a trouble magnet.
| Title: Keeping Up Appearances
| 06 Aug 2008 6:08 pm
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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This is very good,can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks, i should have the new chapter up by tomorrow, I think.
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