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Reviews For Arms of a Dark Angel
Author's Response: he might . . .then again, he might do something worse! Malfoy will also be getting in trouble once Severus finds out what he said about Lily. harry's eye surgery . ..we shall see, no pun intended.
Harry knows that he is wrong he might feel badly and realise for himself that he was rude the man who loves him and who took care of him and might be afraid that Sev will no longer treat him like that and that he has spoilt a great relationship; his guilt should make him miserable and Sev should notice that the boy does feel guilty Author's Response: Yes, Severus was practicing a great deal of control there, I think it shocked him that Harry could totally speak to him with such disrespect, even given the circumstances. As for Sev's punishment, you'll see next chapter. Harry does feel extremely guilty for talking to him that way, and Severus will realize that next chapter as well.
All the kids fight like typical teenagers, I've got three of them at home, so I know. Love the image of Severus tearing his hair out, boy can I sympathize! As for Harry's smart mouth, I'm sure a good session with a bar of soap will make him think twice next time. Author's Response: The surgery part will eventually be addressed. You're right about Harry's mouth, and it will be taken care of.
The quarrels between Ron, Hermione, and Harry and Malfoy were very good. But man, is Harry in HUGE trouble now! Severus will probably nail his butt to the wall for saying that to his face. Ouch! Author's Response: Yes he will. But the kid does deserve it!
Author's Response: He is and so is Severus and it's about to get worse, if you remember what happens in SS. I'll be following the book in most parts here, except for a few deviations here and there. And Severus didn't hear what Malfoy said about Lily otherwise Draco would have been dead meat.
One thing, Voldemorte wanted the position of DADA but Dumbledore wouldn't give it to him so then Voldie cursed. He never held the position. Neat chapter - looking forward to more. Author's Response: No he should not and Severus will be making damn sure he knows it too. You're right about Voldy and the DADA position, the twins were mistaken and Hermione will discover that and correct them, LOL!
Author's Response: It is very hard on Harry and hard on Severus too, since he doesn enjoy being nasty to him, he loves him. And unfortunately, Severus is a perfectionist and doesn't tolerate much in the way of mistakes, God he reminds me of my father.
Yikes, what will Snape do to him? Author's Response: Neither would I. What will Snape do? You'll have to wait to find out! |
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