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Title: Quarreling 11 Aug 2008 6:08 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh! Now he's in for it! I remember last chapter, when Harry said he was glad he was too old to spank, well Sev might just change his mind. And Malfoy ought to get in trouble too, the little snot! I loved how Ron and Hermione bickered and I hope Harry can get the eye surgery. Of course, he has to survive Snape's detention first.

    Author's Response: he might . . .then again, he might do something worse!  Malfoy will also be getting in trouble once Severus finds out what he said about Lily.  harry's eye surgery  . ..we shall see, no pun intended.
Title: Quarreling 11 Aug 2008 6:05 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Sev was counting to a hundred in his mind trying not to put the boy over his knees. Harry realises that Severus is starting to see him as a son and Harry is starting to think of him as a dad, with this in his mind I think Harry is forgetting himself and forgetting that Sev is a teacher. While Draco did rile him Harry was rude and deserves to be punished and I know Sev will punish him but will he punish him like any other student or will he punish him like he would his son.
    Harry knows that he is wrong he might feel badly and realise for himself that he was rude the man who loves him and who took care of him and might be afraid that Sev will no longer treat him like that and that he has spoilt a great relationship; his guilt should make him miserable and Sev should notice that the boy does feel guilty

    Author's Response: Yes, Severus was practicing a great deal of control there, I think it shocked him that Harry could totally speak to him with such disrespect, even given the circumstances.  As for Sev's punishment, you'll see next chapter.  Harry does feel extremely guilty for talking to him that way, and Severus will realize that next chapter as well.
Title: Quarreling 11 Aug 2008 6:05 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved all the quotes in the infirmary and how you described Harry's vision with and without glasses, it was great. I hope Severus pays for his surgery, if he could afford it.

    All the kids fight like typical teenagers, I've got three of them at home, so I know. Love the image of Severus tearing his hair out, boy can I sympathize!

    As for Harry's smart mouth, I'm sure a good session with a bar of soap will make him think twice next time.

    Author's Response: The surgery part will eventually be addressed.  You're right about Harry's mouth, and it will be taken care of.
Title: Quarreling 11 Aug 2008 5:57 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved how Harry said Snape would charge him interest for his glasses. That was too funny. But very like Severus. I wonder if Harry will mention the surgery to Severus, maybe Severus could pay for it too?

    The quarrels between Ron, Hermione, and Harry and Malfoy were very good.

    But man, is Harry in HUGE trouble now! Severus will probably nail his butt to the wall for saying that to his face. Ouch!

    Author's Response: Yes he will.  But the kid does deserve it!
Title: Quarreling 11 Aug 2008 5:00 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    This will definitely be interesting to see. Poor Harry, life's just not going quite right for him right now, he's under a lot of pressure. And Severus had the bad timing to bring up Lily just after Malfoy had badmouthed her. Great job on this chapter :D

    Author's Response: He is and so is Severus and it's about to get worse, if you remember what happens in SS.  I'll be following the book in most parts here, except for a few deviations here and there. And Severus didn't hear what Malfoy said about Lily otherwise Draco would have been dead meat. 
Title: Quarreling 11 Aug 2008 4:18 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    There might just be a light spanking in order. The student does not speak that way to a professor.

    One thing, Voldemorte wanted the position of DADA but Dumbledore wouldn't give it to him so then Voldie cursed. He never held the position.

    Neat chapter - looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    No he should not and Severus will be making damn sure he knows it too.

    You're right about Voldy and the DADA position, the twins were mistaken and Hermione will discover that and correct them, LOL!

Title: Quarreling 11 Aug 2008 3:31 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Poor Harry, though. It's got to be hard to have Severus act one way in private and another way in public. Harry should not have been so disrespectful, of course, but I think Severus should be a little understanding of the difficulty of being Harry in this situation. Of course, Severus is a hard taskmaster and doesn't make excuses for much.

    Author's Response: It is very hard on Harry and hard on Severus too, since he doesn enjoy being nasty to him, he loves him.  And unfortunately, Severus is a perfectionist and doesn't tolerate much in the way of mistakes, God he reminds me of my father. 
Title: Quarreling 11 Aug 2008 2:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy!! I would NOT want to be in Harry's shoes right now!

    Yikes, what will Snape do to him?

    Author's Response: Neither would I.  What will Snape do?  You'll have to wait to find out!

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