this was very nice. i just love the interaction in this chapter! and your version of snape finding Harry. it was wonderful!
Author's Response: I wanted to make it different than the books, and throw in some different plot twists.
| Title: Suspicions
| 17 Aug 2008 8:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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I am simply tingling with excitement to read your next chapter, Snapegirl! Although... you have me wondering what his Animagus form could be. Something graceful and beautiful but deadly as well. I still say either a serpent or a panther. What else fits him? Um... give me a minute to think here... I've read stories where he's been a Dark unicorn. A lion perhaps? I /cannot/ see him as a wolf - he is way too freakin' dignified for that! A type of bird of prey maybe? A falcon or a hawk?
I love the interaction between Severus and Harry; it is very believable and they remain in character throughout the chapters. Again, amazing, /amazing/, work, Snapegirl. You should be proud of yourself.
- So remind me. Why am I reviewing your story when you know how much I love it?
::peeks around the wall:: Are you absolutely 100% sure that Severus isn't a vampire? ::winks and bolts::
Byesies for now!
Love,
Jewels.
Author's Response: No, it's not a wolf, that much I'll tell you! You review my stuff because you can't help yourself, LOL! Get ready for some action with the troll.
| Title: Suspicions
| 17 Aug 2008 2:03 pm
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Wonderful job here. I loved the part with the breakfast and how harry thinks that he's the only one who truly knows the real Snape. He's right. It's too bad no one else knows it. The broom was awesome and I know Harry will take good care of it. Update soon, I want to see what happens with the troll!
Author's Response: You'll be seeing it soon!
Love the relationship seen at breakfast ...I find the personal thoughts great especially Harry’s realisation that he knows Sev better than anyone and sees a side of him that no one else sees I think that this side is the raw Sev him without any masks. Ron is a child in many ways but (I know Hermione is going to realise very soon if not already) Ron should soon realise that Harry does not like anyone to say anything bad about Professor Snape. Love that Snape sent Harry the broom and that Harry told Ron it was a friend of his mom...this would be good to establish this “uncle” so anytime Sev gives Harry anything he could say his uncle gave it to him maybe he could use Sev’s middle name so the others would know of Harry’s “Uncle Tobias (Toby)” and would not connect it to Professor Snape
Author's Response: It is indeed the side of the professor without the mask, the side that only Harry sees. Eventually I think Hermione will notice Harry's reluctance to badmouth Sev and Ron perhaps as well. That's an interesting idea about "Uncle Toby" and I thank you for suggesting it. If I use it, I'll give you credit for thinking of it. It's a great idea of how to explain where all the gifts Severus will provide him with are coming from.
| Title: Suspicions
| 17 Aug 2008 4:51 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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I love this story and Severus' profession of faith. I can totally see him as a dark angel him as Harry's dark angel. I started from chapter 1 and read right through...thanks:)
Author's Response: Thanks, I love picturing Severus that way, as the guardian in the shadows who saves Harry from himself and other students too. He saved Katie Bell in Half Blood Prince too don't forget.
Aww, poor Harry! It's such a pain having to hide his relationship with Severus from everyone. I loved the part with Ron & hermione and the way harry asked her to turn in his potions homework. And the part with Lily dead nearly made me cry.
But the broom was sweet!
Fly, Harry, fly!
(that's a Philadelphia Eagles chant, for all you non-football fans out there, my family loves them!)
Author's Response: It really is hard for them both. Glad you liked the Godric Hollow part, I wanted to do something a little different there. Go Eagles!
| Title: Suspicions
| 17 Aug 2008 1:21 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Wonderful! I love it when Snape goes all protective and the way harry reacted to him was great. So were the dreams, it's clear Harry's feeling a little guilty about getting into that duel now and he's probably thinking about confessing to Severus. The part with Severus and finding Harry in Godric's Hollow was brilliant too.
Author's Response: Yes he's considering it, but he won't be doing it any time soon, not after what happened the last time Severus got angry with him.
| Title: Suspicions
| 16 Aug 2008 3:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous)
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I bet Severus won't be pleased about the troll incident next chapter. And if he catches Quirrel trying to hurt Harry...well, I think the Defense position curse would come into effect before the end of the first term!
Author's Response: No, he most definitely will not and as for Quirrell, he'll be a dead man if Sev ever discovered he tried to hurt his son.
| Title: Suspicions
| 16 Aug 2008 2:56 pm
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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Another great chapter. I loved how Sev and Harry ate together and I wonder of one day Harry will be able to tell Snape about the planned duel? The broom sounds awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks and maybe somedayhe might admit it.
good chapter! it is so sad that severus and harry have to keep their true relationship hidden. you've done a nice job of showing severus' feelings blossoming from guardian to parental.
Author's Response: It is very sad, but it's necessary right now. They have a long year ahead of them and Severus's guardianship will be tested to the limit. Though his love for Harry will never waver.
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