loved getting Sev's veiw of things
loved it...all of it! Harry sure can run the potions master ragged. i think by the time the school year is over he'll need a looooong vacation.
the detention was awesome! well, not for the students. but you reacted exactly how i would have.
poor sev!
Author's Response: Yes, poor Sev! He's gonna need a vacation on some island and several Bahama Mamas, LOL!
While the detention was gruesome enough to deter them (temporary) from any adventures in the near future I think Harry was punished more by having Sev be disappointed in him. Sev did what a good father should do give a good smack and then hug him like he never wanted to let him go and then tell him he is forgiven. I never considered that Sev could have been burnt or injured during Hermione’s distraction, that is a good addition. I like Minerva’s character I am getting the impression that the same way Sev is Harry’s Guardian Angel , Minerva was/is Sev’s Guardian Angel
Author's Response: Yes, he was, and the disappointment will be remembered long after the detention. Severus is trying very hard to give Harry the love and affection he never had and so far he is succeeding. I figured it made sense that Sev would have gotten burned during that part, since it was real fire, though summoned magically. And you're right about Minerva, she has appointed herself Sev's guardian, much as he might insist he doesn't need one, secretly he enjoys having someone else care about him. She sort of takes the place of Eileen.
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| 21 Aug 2008 5:23 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Loved it! The detention was well done and not too mean and the match was brilliantly described. I could feel everything especially Severus's spellcasting. I like the way you dscribed how he focused totally on his goal. And Minerva forcing him to take care of himself is just too funny. But he needs it, since he tends to neglect himself in his concern over Harry.
Author's Response: I really liked doing Snape's point of view there and as for Minerva, she has now decided to take Sev under he wing, so to speak, and you're right, he does need it!
"Troublemakers Three!" Loved that description. The detention was nasty, but deserved! The Quidditch match was great, I'm loving this one every bit as much as I did Heir and Never Again! The part with the essay and Harry saying the only one who would care if he died was Severus nearly made me cry! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks and yeah, the essay was quite sad, seeing as it was also true, however.
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| 21 Aug 2008 5:15 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Ooh what a nasty detention! But that is Soo Snape! perfect! I loved the match too and I hope Poppy mends the poor guy, I hate it when he gets hurt. Can't wait for the defense lessons
Author's Response: She will and yes, that detention was pure Snape. Defense lessons are posted now!
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| 21 Aug 2008 5:12 am
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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This story is turning out to be jsut as good as Heir was! I love the interaction between Harry and Snape and the way Severus loves to scold and then hug him. And Harry is so endearingly innocent at this age. The self defense lessons sound great and the detention was brilliant! Keep it going!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you're enjoying this as much as you did Heir.
I will DEFINTELY keep reading Snapegirl, and I anxiously await the sequel, if you write one, to the Heir of Prince Manner!! I'm tingling with anticipation!!! So get writing!!! Pretty please with sugar on top!!! ;)
Author's Response: Yes, I am most likely going to do a sequel to that one, and right now I'm working on the next chapter of Angel. it should be finished sometime tonight or tomorrow since I'm off tomorrow!
I really do love this story I always knew they was more to Severus I really dont think you explored enough in the books
Author's Response: Yes, i agree, there was much I felt could have been done with Sev in the books, more background, more character development, and I just hated how he died. So in my fics he never dies and lives a better life.
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| 20 Aug 2008 8:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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::howls and throws carafe at wall::
You've made references to at least three other animals! ::curses:: Which is it, woman? Do you enjoy watching me guess and make a fool of myself? ::bawls:: What did I ever do to you? Do you like tormenting me /that/ much?
::growls:: Okay, the chapter was amazing and brilliant as always. I am dying to read the Forbidden Forest chapter with a protective!Animagus!Snape.
Update soon my darling.
Byesies for now.
Lots of love,
Jewels.
Author's Response: Yes I know. But you'll find out soon enough what it is. The suspense makes it fun . . .for me that is! And how did you like the reference to the dark knight during the detention? That was my salute to you, hon! I love writing this one, because I can play around a lot with different outcomes and well . . .you'll see!
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