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Title: Mirror of Dreams 15 Mar 2009 9:50 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Very creeepy and much cooler than the original!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I kind of wanted to make the mirror scary, since it seemed it should have been more than in the books, otherwise why hide it away?
Title: Mirror of Dreams 30 Aug 2008 6:48 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    you know...it took me a while to relize that Erised was Desire spelled backwards.

    nice chapter as always! on to the next one!

    Author's Response: I learned about that after I read one of the HP trivia questions in a game.  Glad you liked my mirror!
Title: Mirror of Dreams 30 Aug 2008 4:57 am
Reviewer: skrwt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, GREAT portrayal of the mirror. I remember that warning from the JKR books and was always disappointed that it never went anywhere. I could easily see this happening to Harry.

    Will Severus find out this is what Harry sees? I wonder what Severus would see - I suspect he would see the same thing. What would happen if they were to look in it together?

    Author's Response: Maybe one day Harry might reveal his secret desire to Sev and if Sev did look in the mirror he would most likely see something similar. As for the two of them together, maybe their combined desire would show up, or maybe nothing or maybe the mirror would break.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 28 Aug 2008 9:44 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it loved it! But my heart hurts for Harry and his wish that might never come true!

    Author's Response: yes, mine does too.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 28 Aug 2008 9:43 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    briliant, as always! The mirror was definitely creepy, as seductive as being on drugs. Ca't wait till they start trying to solve the mystery.

    Author's Response: glad you liked the creepy mirror, i like your analogy.  they'll begin solving the mystery next chapter.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 28 Aug 2008 9:41 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter and I wish Harry's dream could come true! Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: who knows, it might.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 28 Aug 2008 9:34 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor harry! I feel so bad for him. Will he ever be able to reveal what Snape means to him?

    Author's Response: So do I.  he might, someday.
Title: Mirror of Dreams 28 Aug 2008 6:43 am
Reviewer: Bask (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oddly enough i was looking forward to harry being fe? does that make me weird? anyway lovely chapter, i really enjoyed how mirror pulled harry to it. i always thought that he was too easily swayed from it in the 1st book.

    Author's Response:

    Well, he was of fae blood in Heir to Prince Manor, but here he's not.  The mirror in my version is much more seductive, I agree about the first book too, which is why it's different in my version.

Title: Mirror of Dreams 27 Aug 2008 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Ripuku (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. I want the Magic Surgery too. I have really really bad eyesight. I can't go out anywhere without my glasses, I'm so nearsighted.


    Your story is really good. I like how Snape has almost a double personality.

    Author's Response: Me either.  I take them off and I'm blind as a bat.  I can't even drive at night, as I have no peripheral night vision.  And Severus will continue to have that dual personality, so to speak, until the masquerade is no longer needed.  Glad you're enjoying this!
Title: Mirror of Dreams 27 Aug 2008 5:03 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that version of the mirror was great, i would of preferred a more creepier mirror in the books, i do hope one day that harry and severus can come out into the open about what they have been through

    Author's Response: Someday they might be able to, if Severus can assure Harry's safety and his own.  Right now, it's safer for them both if their relationship remains a secret.  I always found the Mirror of Erised was treated too lightly in the books, I mean why hide this mirror away if it wasn't dangerous? So I made it very insidious and subtle and seductive, just the kind of object that would tempt an innocent lonely boy like Harry.

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