Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: A Hidden Danger 16 Sep 2008 5:10 am
Reviewer: akblake (Signed) [Report This]
    You've got Harry playing Slytherin twice in a row. The chapter where his broom went berzerk had Slytherin players, and again the team is playing Slytherin. It's too soon for it to be the final playoffs of the year, especially when there hasn't been any mention of other quidditch games played.

    Author's Response: Actually my timetable is correct, if you follow the original book, since right after the Forbidden Forest the trio finishes the year and goes after the Stone.  I mentioned another game before the one in this chapter where they played Ravenclaw, but months have gone by, even though i didn't mention any of the other games, Harry did play them.  Sorry if it was confusing, but my main focus wasn't Quidditch, but the quest for the Stone. 
Title: A Hidden Danger 04 Sep 2008 5:04 am
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love Harry playing Quidditch!

    But why oh why did he have to eat a poisoned chocolate frog! With grindelwald's portrait inside! AHHH!

    Hurry and update before I come after you with a Tickling Hex!

    Author's Response: NO! Anything but that! Ah, I'm glad you noticed the grindelwald bit, i was wondering if anyone would.  I've updated so hahaha! :)
Title: A Hidden Danger 04 Sep 2008 5:02 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Holy God! You can't leave it there! Poor Harry! Save him, save him! Okay . . .I've got myself under control.

    NOW HURRY AND UPDATE!

    Sorry, I really love this story! :)

    Author's Response: Your wish is my command! Now go and read! LOL!
Title: A Hidden Danger 04 Sep 2008 4:50 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! Update I'm going crazy! Ahhh! Snape better save Harry!

    Author's Response:

    Okay, I'll tell him you said so.  Hey, Sev  . . .

    I've updated too!

Title: A Hidden Danger 04 Sep 2008 4:48 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! You have to hurry and update this please! Can't take the suspense. I have no clue who could be behind this except Quirrell.

    Author's Response: Well, you're partially right.
Title: A Hidden Danger 04 Sep 2008 4:47 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the Quidditch game and Hermione's comment that all the men were like animals. So true! Poor Harry! I predict that Sev will save him, of course and I was surprised the poison was inside the chocolate frog. How did it get there? And who is Quirrell's helper?

    Author's Response:

    it's true, men at sporting events are like wild beasts sometimes.  Ever been to an Eagles game? *shudders* You'll find out how the poison got into the frog next chapter.  As for Quirrell's accomplice . . . .I'm not telling, you'll just have to figure it out.

    Yes, I know, I am mean.

Title: A Hidden Danger 03 Sep 2008 10:29 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    poor lil guy. he's so sweet and innocent, living in a bitter and guilty world.

    Author's Response: Yes, he is.  it's too bad his innocence will be lost once Voldemort returns. 
Title: A Hidden Danger 03 Sep 2008 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm... I wonder, I wonder. Whom could it be that has a death wish for young master Potter? ::rubs hands together:: It couldn't be Quirrell now could it? ::grins wickedly::

    I did get your documents in the e-mail you sent, my dear. Thank you for them!

    Marvellous chapter; I loved that Severus took to watching Harry as Wraith. A beautiful spinnoff on an already unique story. This last little bit has my heart pounding. But I know you too well. You won't kill Harry because he's the focal point of the story. Although... it would be interesting to see Wraith have something to do with Harry's healing.

    There, not a very lengthy review but it's better than my other one. I am very eagerly looking forward to more.

    Update soon.

    All my love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Quirrell is one, of course . . .the obvious one.  But there is another . . .and no, it isn't Voldy. 

    Glad you got all my other stories, let me know how you like them, OK?

    Of course I won't kill Harry!!  When do I ever kill off major characters??? Only if it is absolutely crucial to my storyline does a good character ever die in my novels.  And Wraith will feature prominently in later chapters of this.   

     

    I'm working on the next chapter, by the way.

     

     

Title: A Hidden Danger 03 Sep 2008 9:59 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    poor harry does get into alot of scrapes doesn't he? of course snape will cure harry and then try to track down who poisoned him, then give harry a lecture that will seem to last for days

    Author's Response: He does indeed.  You're right about the first two things, but I think Severus won't scold him too much, since the circumstance of Harry eating the chocolate frog wasn't something he could have foreseen, the chocolate was sealed and Harry had eaten it before without getting sick, so there was no reason to suspect anything was wrong with it. 
Title: A Hidden Danger 03 Sep 2008 7:22 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh no! not another cliffe! why!

    please oh please update soon!

    I beg of you!

    Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter as I write this, so don;t worry!  And you know how I love my cliffies, LOL!

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