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Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 4:04 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Catspaw... such promise yet there is so little of Wraith in the chapter! ::growls:: What do I have to do to make you write more Wraith? Beg? Do I have to bleed? 'Cause I'll go get a knife, I swear I will! ::winks::

    It was a beautiful chapter. I'm sorry this is a bit rushed but I'm in the middle of class right now and really shouldn't be reading this.

    Update soon.

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response: Now that won't be necessary! Wraith will be in later chapters, when it's time for him to reveal himself.  Just be patient, okay? And enjoy the next chapter, which should be posted tonight!
Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 2:25 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, Neville - good one! Should have seen that one coming, although it also could have been Percy.

    Keep it up!

    Author's Response: yes, it could have, but I felt Neville was more believable.  I should be posting the next chapter shortly.
Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 11:12 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow neville?!? i thought it would have been another teacher or maybe an older pureblood gryffindor :) sounds like the next chapter will be action packed :)

    Author's Response: Nope, poor old Neville was the catspaw.  And the next chapter will be packed with action!
Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 6:14 am
Reviewer: hunter_ban (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very surprised!!! Great chapter!

    I like the way you make slight changes to the original. It somehow blend with the original and also makes it more believable, like how Harry becomes a good seeker and how Harry knew that Quirrel will try to steal on that particular night.

    Argghh...I want to know what happened next...(telling self: patient, patient...Snapegirl will update soon...I hope)

    Anyway, once again, Good Job and keep it up.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I try and use the canon storyline along with my own, though not everything that happens in the book will be represented in my story and in fact after a certain event, it will diverge greatly from the original.  But you'll see what I mean later on.  I should be updating soon, like today!
Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 6:09 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    hell ya i was surprised....but poor neville!

    it does make since....he is easily intimidated.

    Update soon! i can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Oh good, then I haven't lost my touch.  Poor Neville indeed! But you are right, he is easily intimidated by almost everyone.  And by the way I reviewed you over at HPFF!
Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 5:53 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm really enjoying how you weave the canon story details into your version--very imaginative!

    Author's Response: Thanks.  It's not easy to do that and still have my own plot line either, it's tricky and I have to think about it a lot.  So I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 5:29 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes I was! This whole chapter was excellent! I loved how you put it all together!

    Author's Response: Thanks and glad I can still surprise you!
Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 5:27 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent. Way to put up Neville to good use. I liked that. Keep it up

    Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to do something different with Neville and figured him being Voldy's pawn would be a good surprise. 
Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 5:26 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a surprise. I really didn't suspect Neville. And off three kids go, looking to save the world. Severus is going to tan Harry's hide.

    Author's Response: Poor Nev, he really got put through the ringer there.  Yes, those three are really looking for trouble.  Sev's going to have heart failure when he learns about this latest escapade and he just might lose it with his ward this time.
Title: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008 5:10 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter! I have to say, Neville really surprised me. great job, can't wait to see what you come up with next!

    Author's Response: Great and I hope you'll like the next part!

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