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Reviews For Arms of a Dark Angel
It was a beautiful chapter. I'm sorry this is a bit rushed but I'm in the middle of class right now and really shouldn't be reading this. Update soon. Love, Jewels. Author's Response: Now that won't be necessary! Wraith will be in later chapters, when it's time for him to reveal himself. Just be patient, okay? And enjoy the next chapter, which should be posted tonight!
Keep it up! Author's Response: yes, it could have, but I felt Neville was more believable. I should be posting the next chapter shortly.
Author's Response: Nope, poor old Neville was the catspaw. And the next chapter will be packed with action!
I like the way you make slight changes to the original. It somehow blend with the original and also makes it more believable, like how Harry becomes a good seeker and how Harry knew that Quirrel will try to steal on that particular night. Argghh...I want to know what happened next...(telling self: patient, patient...Snapegirl will update soon...I hope) Anyway, once again, Good Job and keep it up. Author's Response: Thanks, I try and use the canon storyline along with my own, though not everything that happens in the book will be represented in my story and in fact after a certain event, it will diverge greatly from the original. But you'll see what I mean later on. I should be updating soon, like today!
it does make since....he is easily intimidated. Update soon! i can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Oh good, then I haven't lost my touch. Poor Neville indeed! But you are right, he is easily intimidated by almost everyone. And by the way I reviewed you over at HPFF!
Author's Response: Thanks. It's not easy to do that and still have my own plot line either, it's tricky and I have to think about it a lot. So I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Author's Response: Thanks and glad I can still surprise you!
Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to do something different with Neville and figured him being Voldy's pawn would be a good surprise.
Author's Response: Poor Nev, he really got put through the ringer there. Yes, those three are really looking for trouble. Sev's going to have heart failure when he learns about this latest escapade and he just might lose it with his ward this time.
Author's Response: Great and I hope you'll like the next part! |
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