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Title: Snape's Bargain 09 Sep 2008 1:44 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    As always, excellent! You're just cranking it out, aren't you? Keep 'em coming.

    Author's Response: I had a lot of time to write while I was away on vacation.  it was very peaceful and quiet by the lake in the Pocono mountains.
Title: Snape's Bargain 08 Sep 2008 10:03 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Again, I'm speechless Snapegirl.

    Update soon, darling.

    ::weeps::

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Awww!

     

    Guess what?

    There's a new one up! 

     

Title: Snape's Bargain 08 Sep 2008 8:20 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, loved it, snape yelling at harry about his adventure with helping stop quirell/mouldywarts getting the stone was great as it showed how deeply severus cares about harry.

    severus adopting harry wasn't a shock as you could see it coming and i'm so pleaseed for them, during the school year i take it harry has to be a potter and when out of school he's a snape.

    what would snape of done if dumbles had refused the adoption?

    Author's Response:

    Yes it does, Sev loves his son very much and it kills him when Harry risks his neck over and over.

    That's about how it will be, pretty much.

    Snape would have probably done something very drastic, like turned albus into a cow or Obliviated him. 

Title: Snape's Bargain 08 Sep 2008 8:14 pm
Reviewer: Devilishlycute (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry he is going to be very busy with his punishment chores. I love that Severus could finally adopt Harry as they have always dreamed. Harry will now have to watch his actibities not to metnion his grades. lol Great chapter.

    Author's Response: he certainly will, no two ways about it! And yes, now Harry will have to mind his P &Q's.  But that comes with having a parent.
Title: Snape's Bargain 08 Sep 2008 5:28 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Great going for Percy -

    "Harry stared. "The ruler?"

    "Yeah. He'd dragged me down there by my ear," Ron rubbed it. "To get the cauldron or whatever and saw the ruler on Snape's desk and said "May I borrow this for a minute, sir?" and Snape gave it to him and just looked at us and all he said was, "I want it back when you're through, Percival. I might need it soon." And Percy thanked him, the git, and then he dragged me back up to the tower to his room, he's got his own since he's prefect, and then . . ."

    Loved that paragraph. At a few people at the school realize what the children did was outrageous and stupid.

    Albus is an overbearing, manipulative git. I just wanted to slap. So Harry gets a family but his Dad and he can't acknowledge it and when Voldie comes back, his Dad has to play spy again so that Harry's family may get killed and Harry will have to go back to the Dursleys.

    Just once, i hope that Albus gets to live the life of one of his pawns.

    Love it.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, percy certainly does and I loved writing that part, although I felt sorry for poor Ron even though he deserved it!

    Yes, Albus is a control freak and maybe I'll write a story that has Albus made into a pawn, wouldn't that be a hoot?

Title: Snape's Bargain 08 Sep 2008 4:03 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    *Wipes tear away* I love these scenes, brilliant chapter keep up the great work and please post soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I love writing them.  and there's a new one up by the way.
Title: Snape's Bargain 08 Sep 2008 2:40 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww! Sev really did adopt him! I love it! They are so perfect for each other!

    Author's Response: Yes he did! They really make a good father son pair.
Title: Snape's Bargain 08 Sep 2008 12:22 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    aww im all smiley now! i was hoping that severus would adopt harry : )
    i love suprises in stories so i'll be looking forward to the next chapter : )

    Author's Response:

    You can find out now and Sev was always meant to adopt him.

Title: Snape's Bargain 08 Sep 2008 10:04 am
Reviewer: Romado (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter cant wait for the next one.

    Author's Response: it's posted now, so you can read it!
Title: Snape's Bargain 08 Sep 2008 9:17 am
Reviewer: hunter_ban (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I am glad that Harry chose to live and finally got what he wished for. Same for Severus as well.
    I enjoyed this story a lot. It is one of my favourites.
    Is it a bit too early to request for a sequel even before this one ends?

    Author's Response: Nope, and you're not the first one to ask that either! I'm really excited about a sequel to this, though I have many more stories that need sequels also, like the Heir To Prince Manor and Hide Yourself From A Prisoner.

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