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Title: A Firm Hand 10 Sep 2008 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::cackles evilly::

    I love it. And you included Wraith! Aw, you're so sweet Snapegirl. Ok, random thought that has to do with Wraith and then I won't mention him agagin (in this review at least), I promise. I've read a couple of stories where Severus was an Animagus and he'd transform to comfort Harry, or he'd transform and guard the boy's sleep. What about adding that in the story? Just an idea!

    This chapter was beautiful. I was ready to throttle Marge Dursley. I'm quite glad that she turned her ways around thanks to an overprotective father. ::grins and winks::

    Ok, I have homework. Again, beautiful chapter, update soon!

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    That's an interesting idea, thanks for the tip.

    And who WOULDN"T men their ways with an angry snow leopard on their ass? LOL!

    Go Sev! He sure showed her!

Title: A Firm Hand 10 Sep 2008 8:26 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    That old cow she knew about witches and wizards so why the pretence of St. Brutus' they just can't stand the fact that Harry is a special child and want to degrade and put him down as much as possible. Love her punishment, they are always so concerned about what others think of them well people are certainly talking now. Can you have additional punishments for the Dursleys as well (one possible is taking away a monetary stipend which was to see about Harry and this loss makes them lose all the comforts they were so accustomed to – while making them see Harry in expensive clothes with everything his heart desired).
    Since I didn't get to review the other chapters - vacation has ended :( I am very happy that Sev is now legally Harry's dad, loved Harry's punishment including the fact he had to wait overnight for it - the things his imagination came up with was punishment in itself LOL. Also liked that Percy took charge of Ron - the only one who got away without punishment is Hermione

    Author's Response:

    And they'll have something to talk about for a LOOONG time, LOL!

    I probably will have the Dursleys punished as well, the removal of the money is a great idea! And so is seeing Harry happy with his "Uncle Toby" and living in luxury, hehehe!

    You're right about Harry's punishment and imagination . . .a guilty conscience is the worst thing.

    Percy wouldn't let Ron get away with anything and actually Hermione feels guilty too and was given a lecture as well by someone . . .you'll find out later on.

Title: A Firm Hand 10 Sep 2008 3:21 pm
Reviewer: Arashi (Signed) [Report This]
    That was priceless, I never liked Marge. Hehe the neighbours thinking she was crazy was hilarious.

    Author's Response:

    neither did I, which was why I set Snape on her . . .*grins evilly*

    And now the neighbors will have something new to talk about.

Title: A Firm Hand 10 Sep 2008 1:16 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *pulls out wand* damn i wish i could have helped.

    but snape took care of her well enough. I wanted to hex her too.

    bravo for harry controlling himself like that. I would have done much worse to him then merely cracking the window!

    still i enjoyed the chapter though i must admit that i was cringing right there with harry! No child should ever be abused like that. i loved snapes revenge!

    I can't wait to see what will happen next!

    Author's Response:

    I'm sure Harry would have appreciated your help!

    So would I, by the way.  But Harry's a product of Sev's teachings and some of them took.

    No child should ever be abused and Snape's revenge was sweet . . .and long overdue!

    Check out the next chapter to find out about their new home.

Title: A Firm Hand 10 Sep 2008 11:26 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    brilliant chapter! i loved what snape did to aunt marge, and of course that snape had another chance to heal harry after what that evil woman did! looking forward to the start of their summer : )

    Author's Response: It's going to be very fun-filled and action packed.  I always wanted to stick it to Marge, she was so repulsive!
Title: A Firm Hand 10 Sep 2008 7:09 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter loved how you made Marge be a crazy lady. Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Thanks and I loved getting back at her too!
Title: A Firm Hand 10 Sep 2008 6:25 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that could have been worse. At least, he got to Severus's care.

    Why oh, why, do people in a dangerous situation , insist on talking back to the people who can do them harm. Keep your mouth shut and then get the "Hell out of Dodge."

    Good punishment for Marge.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it could have.

    That's good advice, unfortunately, Harry is too young to have sense, and he allowed his temper to get the better of him.  He had a lot of resentment suppressed and then seeing Marge hurt Hedwig . . .well it was the final straw.  But he paid for it, poor kid, and knows better now.

    Glad you like Marge's well-deserved payback. 


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